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The Fall of the Falas  by perelleth 9 Review(s)
AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/8/2021
Suilaid, mellon.

Can't thank you enough. This story and the rest I've read.

Makes me cozy inside reading your stories regarding the Noldor, my favourite clan.



Author Reply: Hi, Aranadhel, thanks for letting me know!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/2/2021
A terrible event to watch, even as he has come to appreciate what is being done, and how the very walls of the city have cooperated to destroy the enemy. But Ulmo loves Cirdan, while Osse and Uinen will combine their wills to bring him to the remaining fleet.

I would be surprised if Ereinion were not weeping at the sacrifice of the place that has sheltered him for so long.

Author Reply: The Fall of the Falas alwayss hit me hard when reading the Silm... a couple of lines and yet so devastating that only a handful survived. I wanted to explore how that must have felt.
Only one chapter left, now, thanks, Larner!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/2/2021
All are doing what is needful, in spite of grief, fear, and danger. Ereinion must now follow his orders, and Hathol will hopefully receive the medical aid he needs. Now, to ride as fast as can be wrought from the horses....

Author Reply: Thanks!
Fortunately to move such an army would take time, so some will still be saved!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/2/2021
They are doing well so far. Now, to get back to Hathol and then the city in time to retreat properly to the havens Cirdan has had prepared for them.

Author Reply: I guessed they might have had some sort of plan in case of failure, but still Morgoth's victory after the Nirnaeth was so sweeping and swift!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/2/2021
Terrible thoughts that need to be tested. Where IS Ereinion right now? And if he is at the site of the fired watchtower, so much might happen, and might be lost with the young ellon.

Author Reply: Poor Falathrim...barely returned from the Nirnaeth and having to abandon their cities. Thanks!

mystarlightReviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/18/2021
Breathtaking chapter!!!

Author Reply: Thanks!

mystarlightReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/18/2021
I love all your stories. I am so happy with another chapter.

Author Reply: Happy to hear! Thanks!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/12/2021
He should perhaps have been more careful of the unusual packing of the leaves.

Author Reply: Hi Larner!
Yes, fortunately for him, we know he will live to learn from his mistakes..

mystarlightReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/11/2021
Wonderfully written story. Can't wait for more chapters!!!

Author Reply: Oh thanks! They are coming up!

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