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| The Unquenchable Light by Virtuella | 4 Review(s) |
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| Leithian | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/29/2024 |
| Hi Virtuella. How are you? The new chapters are really interesting. However I'm confused about Krâ. Is it also a country you invented for the story or is it a name of an actual country in the language of the Kûz? I was also reading your essays and I wondered if you had any plans to post more chapters in that vein discussing LOTR themes. I found them very thought provoking and engaging. Goodnight and take care. Leithian Author Reply: Hi, Leithian, the Kra are what in LOTR canon is known as the Easterlings. They live to the West of the Sea of Calma, while the Kuzeen live in the South and East. You can check this out on the maps that I linked in the prologue. I am glad you like my essays. I am not adverse to writing more in the same vein, though there is no particular topic that springs to my mind at this time. Maybe you have a suggestion? | |
| Leithian | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/16/2024 |
| Hi Virtuella. This story about a far off land in the East of Middle Earth is so interesting. It is so difficult to find stories set during the War of the Ring from the point of view of the Eastern people. I love your take on the story that the Blue Wizards encouraged the resistance against Sauron in the East. And it is so nice to see Entwives playing their part in this fight. If you don't mind may I ask if you based the culture of Kutz on Indian culture? The presence of the peacocks as well as the vegetarian culture reminded me of India. Thanks for reading this and I hope you update soon. Author Reply: Hello, thanks for your comments. The way I imagine Kuz is a blend of the four major Eastern cultures - India, China, Japan and Persia. I have more chapters ready, just waiting for them to come back from proofreading. | |
| Ellynn | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 7/21/2024 |
| It's fantastic to read the new story of yours! You have been absent much too long! As always, your writing is great <3 I love this world you created, and I love it that you included Alatar and the entwives. What a great surprise! P.s. Any chance for a map of those distant lands? And of the city? It would be easier to follow the story, at least for me ;) Author Reply: Glad you like it! I do have maps, but am not sure how I can share them on this site (or any of the other archives, really.) Happy to email them to you. | |
| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 7/16/2024 |
| Oh Virtuella! It is so lovely to see that you are still with us! I have enjoyed reading what you have written about Lord of the Rings since those first stories in 2008. I have read other stories which intimated that the two Blue Wizards likely worked among the peoples of the Eastern lands to inspire them to resist evil, just as Mithrander did in the West. And it is lovely to see that the Entwives are listened to and respected in their chosen new land. I remember reading that Sauron's ambassadors tried to propose an alliance with the Dwarves of Erebor, and were also met with refusal. Now, I hope the ambassador's retribution is not too harsh! I will be watching! Author Reply: Thank you, it is nice that people still remember me! I have been busy with other things and other hobbies (textiles, painting), but am ready to have another outing in Middle-earth. I hope you'll enjoy the story as it unfolds. :) | |