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The Four in the Morning Visitors  by Ithilien 17 Review(s)
fliewatuetReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/19/2004
Wow, that was absolutely lovely! Legolas' nervousness around the child, Gimli's confidence, and, best of all, the description of Eldarion's face as he prepared to make his discomfort known. Not to mention the pair's reaction to the contents of Eldarion's diapers *grin*. And, as a positive side-effect (apart from the royal couple deciding to find another nurse), Arwen and Aragorn get some well-deserved rest.

As I said before, lovely, absolutely lovely!

And Happy Birthday to both you and Nightwing!

fliewatuet

PervincaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/19/2004
Very well done! I certainly am satisfied. The way this story was written reminded me of how "The Hobbit" was written, and I enjoyed that touch. And any story about Legolas and Gimli is always a joy to read. Fabulous work, and happy birthday to both of you!

Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/18/2004
"I've hit the motherlode, Legolas!"- i just couldnt keep in the laugh for that one. Very entertaining, i must say.I have truly had to stop myself from laughing at what they did. As i said before, truly entertaining. I love it. thanks for the good read!

steph-hReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/18/2004
That was so funny! I was laughing the whole way through virtually. I loved the style as well.

Brenda G.Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/18/2004
Totally delightful in every way. I laughed and laughed all the way through this story. Very clever, witty - a great read!

LydiaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/18/2004
Very cute story! Do you have anymore about their adventures with baby Eldarion?

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/18/2004
This amused me greatly. I particularly loved the conversations between Legolas and Gimli. Legolas's wonder at the baby seems consistent for a creature from a race that has few children, and Gimli seems more practical but just as loving. How lucky Eldarion is to have them!

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