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| The Rise Of The House Of Telcontar by French Pony | 39 Review(s) |
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| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/10/2004 |
| My sympathies are with Arwen in the library. My husband always said that my first reaction to any new experience was to look it up in a book. The stuff about the big baby etc. is a little scary. I like tall, broad Aragorn, but poor Arwen! | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/10/2004 |
| I wonder how much of an Elf Arwen was at this point. She would have been more than three-quarters Elf, right? But was she changed when she bound herself to Aragorn? And what would be the effect of a fully human father (Elros's blood must have been pretty diluted by then) on the child she was carrying? And how would that affect the pregnancy? All that aside, I like these female characters you are creating. | |
| eokat | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/4/2004 |
| Poor Arwen, she has got it bad. Firstborn and secondborn pregnancy symptoms rolled into one. It's bad enough just having the 'normal' symptoms{talking from personal experience]. Hope she feels better next chapter, although I have a feeling that this problem is only the beginning. | |
| Mirari | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/29/2004 |
| An intriguing start - just thought I'd let you know that I'm tuning in. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/29/2004 |
| This story raises a good question. How difficult would Arwen's pregnancies have been? There would have been no way to predict. And I waited three months before telling outsiders I was pregnant too. Miscarriages are just too common before then even in normal circumstances. | |
| eokat | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/28/2004 |
| Very promising, looking forward to reading further chapters. | |
| paranoidangel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/28/2004 |
| That's an interesting start. I'm wondering what it is Arwen is troubled by and what's going to happen. I love your idea of exploring the hybrid problem as well - it's something I've thought about before. | |
| websterans | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/27/2004 |
| Tantalizing!! Please do continue! | |
| eowynthegreat | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/27/2004 |
| What a nice start! I'm not much into A/A, but this has me hooked. Keep going please | |