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Echoes  by Grey Wonderer 51 Review(s)
Lyta PadfootReviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/16/2004
I imagine it would take a pre-Quest Frodo back to see Sam as Mayor. Still dying to know what is among those papers!

Author Reply: More is on the way. With any luck, you should get your answers soon. Thanks so much for reading this far and reviewing as this one is a bit different.

Lyta PadfootReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/16/2004
Merry's right, it is a funny situation. Glad Pippin was able to laugh, he seems very depressed.

Author Reply: Yes, Pip is in a spot of trouble at present, but Merry is feeling a bit better at this point as he can see the hunor in all of it. He did get Pippin to relax a bit at least for a while.

PervincaReviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/16/2004
And now Sam has entered the mix! This is certainly going to end up being a very interesting story! Glad to see that Pippin knows he had messed things up with Diamond - hopefully that means he will fix it up. You're very mean, you know. Hinting at what Estella has found out, but not telling. So mean!

(Oh, and one thing I meant to pick you up on earlier - not sure if anyone has yet. You used "Creek hollow" instead of "Crickhollow" as the name for the house in Buckland. Just letting you know :D)

Author Reply: PF beat you to the Creek Hollow/Crickhollow mistake already and it has been fixed, but thanks for watching out for me.
As to Pip, hope to clear up his motives soon, but he really does know he's messed up on this one, he is just having trouble getting out of it.

Oh, and I do tend to be on the mean side from time to time, it is part of my winning charm! Thanks so much for reading.

AuntiemeeshReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/15/2004
What a great twist to the story. Pippin's bewilderment is so well-depicted, and how nice to see Frodo again, looking well and happy!

Author Reply: Thank you. I am glad that Pip and Frodo came off well. I think suddenly being 16 again would confuse anyone! LOL And any time I can include Frodo and have him pre quest, I enjoy doing so.

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/15/2004
This is so cool--reminds me of the movie Big (very good movie). Pippin gets to rediscover the kid in him while Merry just enjoys the ride (so like him!). It will also be interesting to see what Estella finds in/on the Thain's desk...

Pippinfan

Author Reply: I love that movie and I hadn't thought of that! LOL I am doing the hobbit version of a Tom Hanks film! Now, if that isn't original I don't know what is. Thanks for the review.

PervincaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/15/2004
Argh! This is just getting more and more interesting. I didn't realise that you were going to cut back to what Estella and Diamond were up to - now I hope that you will get back to them soon, so that I can find out what Peregrin's done wrong! I've got my fingers crossed for a very happy ending to this story. You're good at those! Please continue soon, I'm starting to wonder who else is going to show up!

Author Reply: I thought it best to keep the ladies busy while Merry and Pippin were off where-ever, besides you never know what they might find. Keep your fingers crossed as I need all of the luck I can get just to get this one finished.

hobbit_lassReviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/14/2004
I wonder what she is going to find among his papers? Hmmmmmmmm. . . . must continue to read!
Enjoying it immensly-

Author Reply: I like the enjoying immensly part, thank you.

That Estella has really got a lot of nerve, doesn't she? She's bound to turn up something or I have gone and wasted a chapter, haven't I?

hobbit_lassReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/14/2004
Poor Pip! No drink or smoking! Oh well, seeing Frodo and Doc will make up for it im sure. To be sixteen again, on second thought, never mind! Great story so far! Im enjoying the twists!

Author Reply: Everyone enjoys seeing old friends! But, no way would I want to be 16 again. I think Pippin's reaction to that is pretty much what mine would be. Thanks for the review and I am glad you are enjoying this one.

hobbit_lassReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/14/2004
What a great idea! CAnt wait to see where this goes!


Author Reply: Thank you. From what I can see at this point it goes for about 13 chapters and maybe a 14th if the author gets long-winded like sometimes happens. Thanks for reviewing!

Lyta PadfootReviewed Chapter: 6 on 3/14/2004
Pippin seriously needs a vacation if he is even thinking about growing up again so he can do a better job of being Thain!

Author Reply: Well, in a tiny way, I think Pippin is getting a vacation at the moment. Lets just hope he doesn't bore his friends to death with his slides when he returns from his trip.

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