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Echoes  by Grey Wonderer 51 Review(s)
Lyta PadfootReviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/14/2004
Poor Diamond, the thought that she would actually PREFER losing Pippin to someone else rather than his position is heartbreaking. I'm very curious to see what Estella finds among Pippin's papers.

Author Reply: Diamond has had a rough year all right and as to Estella, well, she may be on to something with her little search, only time and several more chapters will tell.

Lyta PadfootReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/14/2004
Erry and Pippin in Middle-Earth's Twilight Zone continues! Yeah!

Author Reply: I was trying to fit Rod Serling in there somewhere, but he really goes against canon and so I am leaving him out of this one. As I write it, I can heard the Twilight Zone music in my head, though. It seems to help in this case. LOL

Lyta PadfootReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/14/2004
Quite a surprise for the Thain and the Master of Buckland to find themselves children again. Frodo's appearance was wonderful... mayhaps Merry's prediction will come true and Bilbo will turn up! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author Reply: With me writing, there is always a change of a surprise visit from Dear Bilbo. Glad you enjoyed Frodo's part in this twisted little fiction and I think that Merry and Pippin are in for a few more surprises along the way.

Lyta PadfootReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/14/2004
Pippin is pretty stressed out and not helping himself. As much as I sympathize with him, his treatment of those around him is deporable and dishonorable. Hope you knock some sense into him.

Author Reply: Before this is over, Pippin just might get knocked around a bit so stick around. At this point stress-wise, I think I have taken my job and given it to poor Pippin, a dirty trick to play on anyone!

Lyta PadfootReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/14/2004
I doubt Bilbo will turn up at the party, but somehow I don't think it will be dull! Not with you writing it!

Author Reply: Why, thank you. I am in hopes that this doesn't get dull, I don't mind it becoming a bit strange, but I am trying to avoid dull. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/14/2004
You certainly are taking this well!" Pippin ranted. "I am sixteen! How can I be sixteen again? I didn’t enjoy it the first time and now I have to do it again?..." - Grey Wonderer

ROFL! Oh my gosh--this is too funny!

"If you come up with something, Pip, you let me know," Merry sighed. "I got my face slapped earlier by Estella because I kissed her, thinking that she was my wife. -GW

(Wiping tears of laughter away) My sides are hurting--and I'm not even through with the chapter yet!

This is going to be a great ride! Do you have any more of those berries?

PF

Author Reply: Hey, I've written a funny one! Good for me! This sounded funny at 3am, but you never know what they will be like in the morning do you? LOL If you like this one, then there is one coming up, think its chapter 6, that should be a real knee-slapper! Thanks for reviewing.

"Silly hobbits shouldn't eat the nasty berries!" Gollum

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/14/2004
"I don’t see why I am expected to come to a party anyway. They want me to run things efficiently and to be a proper Thain, but they expect me to drop everything and come to a silly party." - Grey Wonderer

Darn! I know what you're feeling there, Pip! lol That statement hits just a little too close to home for me...

I can already tell this is going to be a fantastic tale. I do believe that even the best of friends go through trials and tribulations. That's what refines their love. This is great writing!

Pippinfan


Author Reply: I think we all can agree with Pippin on that "expect me to run things efficiently..." bit. I know it happens to me too. I keep telling people that I am not the efficient type, but do they listen? Of course not!

Glad you are enjoying this one, but hang on as it is about to get a bit strange.

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/14/2004
I also wanted to add that I really do love your characterization of a sarcastic Merry!

Pippinfan

Author Reply: Why thank you! I am a bit sarcastic myself and so someone in these stories had to reflect that. Merry got the job and he seemed perfect for it at the time.

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/14/2004
This sounds good! So Pippin and Merry have a bit of a barrier between them, eh? This will be interesting to watch them resolve it.

Pippinfan

Author Reply: No friendship can go smoothly all of the time unless one person has no opinions at all and with these two, I doubt that is the case. Both of them seem to have plenty to say most of the time, so here we go...

Anso the HobbitReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/14/2004
Poor Pip! Working too hard thinking he can do everything by himself. That does sound like something Merry could do, overly responsible as he is, but maybe it is possible for Pip too. As you let Merry say, Pip does try too hard. I wonder... are those berries he ate making him see things? Are they hallucinogenic?

Anyway, keep writing and update soon :)

Author Reply: At this point, Pip is being motivated by something completely different, but you'll see when the time comes. And as to the berries, well, everyone knows you can't eat everything that you find outside. Someone should have told Pippin I guess.

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