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| The Shoemaker's Daughter by Soledad | 14 Review(s) |
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| Imrahoil | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/3/2006 |
| Na endlich, meine Güte, hast Du uns darauf warten lassen, freu mich schon auf eine freie Minute, um in Ruhe zu lesen. Gruß Imrahoil Author Reply: Na ja, es war auf dem Otherwolds board die ganze Zeit, wie Du weißt. *g* | |
| Lasse-Lanta | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/30/2005 |
| The idea of using original characters and weaving them around canon situations has always been intriguing to me; and one I whole-heartedly support. In many ways I find it an even greater compliment to Tolkien than to just place his characters in new situations. If anyone can do this, it would be you, Soledad. Your detail of place and personality with original characters always sets your work well above the usual and expected. Being given the gift of beta-reader simply enhances the experience for me. My only suggestion at this point is to perhaps not warn people that there are mainly original characters, nor would I say that there is no suspense left for those who have read you other work. Rather, I would call it an enhancement or back story to something else you've written, as I did with my "Adventurers". This might lead new readers to other works and more enjoyment :-). My second suggestion; and it's so very selfish *g*; is to please don't make us wait too long for that second chapter. Lasse-Lanta | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/30/2005 |
| I will confess I had a little trouble getting into this, Soledad, because the first few screens seemed pretty heavy with exposition. But once the characters came on stage and started talking and interacting, I was engaged. Herumor is an appealing young man, and Henderch is interesting. I can see potential for all kinds of stories here. Author Reply: Yes, I'm aware of the fact that there might be just a bit too much information to digest. But it's going to be a rather long story, and the settings are very important for future events. I'm glad the first few pages didn't frighten you off. :) | |
| Karri | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/29/2005 |
| This is excellent so far. :-) The setting and the characters are extremely well developed. I think it has the making of a fine novel. Author Reply: Thanks. I hope I'll be able to keep a good balance between background and action. | |