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Reunion in Minas Tirith  by Baggins Babe 72 Review(s)
EndaewenReviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/8/2005
This is a great discovery, for which I have to thank Shirebound for pointing me in the right direction.

I was just going to review at the end of the story, but this chapter had me laughing so hard, I had to express my appreciation.

I can see all the characters acting the way you have them, not too far off the books.

Author Reply: I'm delighted that you have discovered this universe and that you're enjoying it. Hope you have since discovered all the others - lots of hobbity fun, laughter, Merry and Pippin nonsense and who know what else. 'Buckland Celebration' is another one, and my current long story 'Birthday Surprises' is shaping up nicely.

Thank you for reviewing. I love it when I find a previously undiscovered author.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 11 on 8/31/2005
I was desperately in need of cheering up this evening, and ran back to this happy, teasing, lovely, fluffy chapter. I do love this so much, BB. Thank you for writing such wonderful stories.

Author Reply: I'm sorry to learn that you were in need of cheering, but delighted to know that my story helped. I've loved writing these stories as much as you appear to have enjoyed reading them. I love writing happy, healed Frodo.

Watched ROTK EE today, so I'm re-inspired to continue 'Birthday Surprises'!

sqrt(-1)Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/29/2005
So far I'm enjoying this AU. Is there a something that comes before it, or have you intentionally referred to things (like Rufus the cat & Rosie's tea towel) that are not explained or given background? And that's not a criticism, if you have - done sparingly, and in a way that doesn't end up with throughly confused readers (which I think you've accomplished), I actually like it, think it makes things feel more real. One thing I feel I must point out, just because it gave me such a jolt - most fanfic writers use "naneth" to mean "mother," not "grandmother." From the rest of the story it's clear that you know Galadriel is Arwen's grandmother, but due to the typical usage of the word it seems like Arwen is referring to Galadriel as mother. I have no idea what's right, I know very litle of either elvish language, but it might confuse some people. Oh, and I love your use of the word "piffle" in an earlier chapter - I thought only my grandmother said piffle! It's such a nice, old-fashioned sounding word for hobbits to use.

Author Reply: Glad you're enjoying this story. Rufus and the tea towel do come into the flashback scenes and are in some of the stories set prior to the journey to Minas Tirith. Like most cats, Rufus is just 'there' and part of the family.

I somehow thought that Arwen might look upon Galadriel as her mother, having lost Celebrian long before, and as she spent a lot of time in Lothlorien. Just one of my little quirks. :-))

The word 'piffle' is still fairly common in Britain and you're right, it does sound 'hobbity.'

Hope you enjoy the rest of the tale.

Lotrgirl1415Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 4/4/2005
I saw this story only on your last update, so I copied it to my computer and enjoyed every page of it!
This "what if" story is just one example of how creative LOTR fans can be.
And might I add, an AWESOME example.:)
I mean lots of people who have read the books/ seen the movies have often asked themselves " what if Frodo stayed in Middle Earth, and what would have happened if they did."
I really like the fact that this isn’t a "what if he stayed" love story.
I mean they are cute, but so overdone.
I love the fact this story was so original!
Kudos!
I hope you continue writing "what if stories" or maybe even gapfillers!
J'aime votre travail ! Vous êtes si doué !

Lots of Hobbity love!:*
--Katie

Author Reply: This was the first in what has now become a series - what Dreamflower call my 'Reunion-verse' stories, such as 'Buried Memories' and 'Buckland Celebration' among others.
I'm so pleased you discovered it and that you enjoyed it. I love writing this series so there will certainly be more.

CarolineReviewed Chapter: 14 on 3/29/2005
I enjoyed this story so much! I love LoTR, but I've always felt that the way it ends is sad in a way. Your exploration of what could have happened had Frodo stayed in Middle Earth was well-written, creative, and fun to read. Thanks!

Author Reply: I agree with you about the end of LOTR. Of course my head knows it is the 'right' ending really but my heart would rather it had ended differently.
Besides, I think Frodo goes through so much horror and angst, not just in the book but in so many other stories, that I thought he could do with some fun and a chance of recovery.

MirkwoodmaidenReviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/28/2005
My dear!

I love Ch. 9. It is wonderfully written. Again you've developed a real talent for writing Pub scenes. It must have been all that field work that you and I did!

The Great Mathom house was well described. It made me want to leap through the computer screen and visit it. The detail made it come alive! You could see what made the Fellowship such a awesome achievement.

the chapter is written with humour and humanity! I truly believe that Aragorn would have that "common touch" just as you describe. Court life I think would seem very confining!

The Pheriannath wing the houses of the Healing was a lovely idea and the care with which it describes the design for children was equally wonderful.

Suffice to say I really enjoyed it!

MM (PEF)

Author Reply: Thank you for those kind words. I just don't think Aragorn would be a distant monarch, and he certainly wouldn't be so with his beloved hobbits.
I wanted Rose to react to all she saw in the museum.

All that fieldwork we did in English pubs certainly paid off! I have you to thank as my research assistant.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 14 on 3/25/2005
Thank you again for this wonderful story!
There were some dark moments in it, but in the end there was only joy and happiness. How would I have liked the books to end like this!
And now you gave me an alternative ending! I'm happy :)

IthilrandeReviewed Chapter: 14 on 3/24/2005
I seldom am moved to write in response to stories, but I wished to thank you for the sweetness of this. I am especially impressed with the quality of writing. It is seldom that others are able to capture the magic of words as the Professor did. I was deeply moved by this passage...

"The land was preparing to go to sleep for the winter, guarding the seeds for next summer's harvest. The trees were still wearing their autumnal colours, although most were in scanty garb now, the last few leaves clinging on gallantly until they were torn away by the first gale. Dry leaves gathered in drifts in the gateways and under hedgerows, eddying and swirling as the wind caught them. In the distance the land was veiled in a damp mist and a haze from many bonfires. Smoke puffed from many chimneys and drifted in the still air."

I found the smells and the feel of the chill autumn air surrounding me whilst I sat in my office cubicle. A great feat that I felt compelled to acknowledge. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Thank you.

Author Reply: Thank you so much for your comments. I suppose the English (Shire) countryside is embedded in my soul, and autumn is such a beautiful time of year.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 14 on 3/24/2005
OMG!!*crying&laughing*
This was the *perfect* ending to a wonderful story!!
Why would anyone want an angsty, miserable AU, when they can have a sweet and happy one like yours? Talk about eucatastrophe--this is the ending I sometimes wish JRRT had given us in the first place!

Take a bow for a job well done!!!

Breon BriarwoodReviewed Chapter: 14 on 3/24/2005
Bravo! Bravo! *standing ovation*

What an incredible ride this has been. From the angst and illness to the healing and happiness, this is a wonderful story that I will be reading again. :D

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