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| Broken Sky by joannawrites | 13 Review(s) |
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| Leah | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/18/2003 |
| Wow! Great story. I love a really good original plot. It adds a nice mix to the usual stories you read, and let me tell you, you have one of the best. I can't wait to read more. Hopefully Faramir won't die. It was so cute how upset he was over the kiddnapping, I mean of course he was upset but you could just tell how much he loves her. Keep up the great work. | |
| chris | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/18/2003 |
| wow! stunning story! what a gripping tale - your writing is very impressive and your story original and well thought-out - i'm really looking forward to reading more:) | |
| Rose Gamgee | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/16/2003 |
| Ohhhh man . . . this story is amazing! It only took me a few paragraphs to fall in love with your writing style. It's very eloquent and dramatic. And you've got a wonderful grasp of the characters - how they speak, how they act and react. And sheesh, Faramir . . . your descriptions gave me a perfect visual of him, looking so much like his brother. It broke my heart to read about him. ". . . his fingers curled into the dirt below him in an agony that had nothing to do with arrows." Just tragic. My only complaint in this story is the fact that Gimli hasn't showed up yet, but I'll be patient. ;-) This is excellent, I can't wait to read more! | |