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A Garden of Thought   by Primsong 44 Review(s)
Queen Galadriel...again :-)Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 12/30/2005
You know, this could very easily be sung. I was rereading and sang the first verse just now. Then I felt the tears coming and couldn't sing any more. :-)

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 13 on 12/30/2005
*wipes eyes* Oh, Primsong, that is absolutely beautiful! These verses completely capture the escence of the many partings on that day. Wonderful! God bless,
Galadriel

P.S. It's so good to find authors I know from other places. I read stories at the LOTR fan club archive for a long time before I found this site.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 10 on 12/30/2005
Oh my! This is like a knife to the heart! Poor Pippin!

It's so very plaintive and evocative. His fearful question about Frodo and Sam, wondering if they are alive and together. I love the repitition "Where has Merry got to in all this?"

This is just gorgeous!

I hope to come back to the rest of these later. You are a marvelous poet.


DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/30/2005
Surely the one who taught you to deceive so well
Is trustworthy...


And of course, that is the whole point of it, isn't it. Grima has placed his trust in one who has taught him to be untrustworthy.

Very chilling and well done!

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