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Frodo's Bane and Pippin's Stomach  by Analyn 16 Review(s)
EllyBagginsReviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/25/2004
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...this is such a lovely chapter! can't wait for the next one! i prayed by the way, best of luck!

Mysterious JediReviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/21/2004
Good story. One thing I noticed is that "dialated blue pupils" makes no sense. Pupils are the black part, irises are the colored part.

Author Reply: I KNEW that didn't sound right! Thanks for the tip. I just corrected that part.

trishetteReviewed Chapter: 7 on 9/23/2003
The chapters are good! I'm just usually too lazy to review...

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 7 on 9/22/2003
Well done Arwen Baggins!!
I am so glad that Pippin and Sam talked things out. And it was so cute having Merry fall asleep with his head in the ashes. This is all such an important part of our Pippin growing up! Keep Writing!

Pearl Took

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/18/2003
Arwen dear,

I will be praying for your dear Oma. I firmly believe that God performs miracles, I also firmly believe he guides the minds and hands of the researchers who discover and perfect the medicines that we have that have saved so many lives. I had recently read about the new drugs they have that are shrinking (in one case) or destroying the blood supply for (in the other case) various kinds of tumors. I will pray for the miracle, I will also pray that one of these drugs will work for your Oma. I will pray for your Opa's salvation and for strength for your family as well.

I'm really enjoying your story and will wait patiently for when you can resume writing.

In Christ,
Pearl Took

Mysterious JediReviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/11/2003
I am a Christian and believe in the power of prayer. I will pray for your family and ask others to do the same. I admire your open faith. My email address is muttsrule@mchsi.com

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