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| Consequences of a Fall by Dreamflower | 227 Review(s) |
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| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/12/2006 |
| A Horrid Hyacinth story! Oh good, I'm sitting back in anticipation. I bet I know just who would try to harm an innocent tween's reputation like that. And why. It took a long time for the comeuppance to arrive, but poetic justice turns up in its own time. Looking forward to more. Author Reply: Oh, you have a lot to anticipate--Hyacinth reveals to the readers just *how* evil she really is--even though the other characters have a few more years to understand her duplicity. Evil!Hyacinth is fun to write... | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/12/2006 |
| I am so glad this is being posted here. I find it so much easier to read and comment in this format than over on Pippinhealers. I thought Pippin's worry over not liking Lalia was very accurate. You do feel a bit guilty when someone you've never cared for dies. I also liked the fact that Paladin sent the children inside before bringing up the unpleasant details. They would have to know but not the minute they arrived. Author Reply: Hi GW! Yes, it is a bit easier. But I had fun posting it over there too; it kind of livened things up a bit. Pippin, especially would feel like that--he always wants to like people, and when he doesn't he feels guilty anyway; her dying made him feel even worse. And, yes, Paladin would want to speak to the adults before they said anything to the children. | |
| mews1945 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/11/2006 |
| A very interesting first chapter. I feel sorry for Pearl, and poor wee Pippin as well. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. Author Reply: I hope that the story will continue to hold your interest; I had a good time writing it... | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/11/2006 |
Nice..very nice...now you got me curious... Pippin is upset that he didn't like Lalia, she wasn't a nice either, couldn't blame him...and Merry, is more into waiting for frodo to come, very cute.... I wonder who put those rumors about poor Pearl. And Hyacinth, deserves what she got, never liked her... Please continue,soon... Author Reply: Well, I am afraid Hyacinth is not a very likeable person... The next chapter will be up as soon as the beta is complete. | |
| GamgeeFest | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/11/2006 |
| Who indeed? I think I already know the answer to that one, but we'll see. I'm interested to see your take on this story. I love Pippin's guilt for not liking Laliah and the mention of how hard he tried to like Reggie's daughters. He feels he should like everyone. I also liked Merry's complete lack of guilt and that he was just looking forward to seeing Frodo again. He always sees the silver lining, doesn't he? ;) Author Reply: Well, naturally you do. *grin* Pippin always thinks he should like everyone, so naturally he feels badly when he does not, poor child. Merry, on the other hand has no such compunctions. If people are not likeable, well, then he doesn't like them--it's their loss for being so disagreeable, LOL! | |
| Queen Galadriel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/11/2006 |
| Oh no, this doesn't sound good. The jewelry and their mother look to be involved, and that's ominous in itself. And poor Pearl! I don't exactly feel sorry for Lalia, but why on earth would anyone not set the brake properly on a chair just because she was overbearing and sharp-tongued? I'm really excited to see where this is going! God bless, Galadriel Author Reply: Yes, you will indeed find the jewelry and their wicked mother involved. And you will learn more of the accident as the story progresses... | |
| PIppinfan1988 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/11/2006 |
| I look forward to re-reading this lovely tale! And for Little Pippin's sake, I shall try to behave myself when commenting about Hyacinth...a wee bit, anyway. :-) Every detail is wonderfully described, picture-perfect in my head--which makes you such a fantastic author! Author Reply: Yes, we must watch our language around Little Pippin, LOL! *blushes* Thank you! 8-D | |