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Reconciliation  by Larner 140 Review(s)
AmiReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/25/2006
I am really looking forward to this story, Larner. I loved "Ties of Family", and this new story about those left behind will be just as poignant.

I have a feeling, though, you will make us miss Frodo just as much as his family will.

Author Reply: It's always difficult to lose someone well loved; and in this case where so many questions remain for those Frodo didn't take into his confidence, which included so many who knew and loved him so well, it's more difficult. Glad you are going to follow this one. It fits into gaps in "The Ties of Family" as well as serving as a sequel to "The Acceptable Sacrifice."

KittyReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/25/2006
Oh Larner, I hadn’t expected a new story so soon, and certainly not this, but I’m so happy you’re writing it! Admittedly it didn’t exactly belong to ‚The Acceptable Sacrifice’, as that was Frodo's story, not to mention TAS was already the longest story at SoA, but I wanted to know more than the bits from your other fics about how this ended. Thank you *so* much for writing it!

It’s good to see Paladin being back to normal. What a shock for him (and of course Saradoc), going to apologize to his son and to find Crickhollow empty! Thank godness the letters arrived just then and helped them to guess what truly happened, so they hadn’t to worry their sons would be away again for an unknown fate and length of time. Particularly as they just had to accept Bilbo and Frodo were both dying.

I’m glad they didn’t continue to question Brendi. It must be rather difficult for him, knowing exactly what happened, but not able to tell them anything just now! Probably even more so as he himself loved Frodo so much and is very sad as well.

Now I look forward to their meeting with Halladan, Gilfileg and Eregiel!

Thank you again! *hugs*

Author Reply: Well, it's your fault and Dreamflower's that this was written, you know! Hope you continue to enjoy it.

For the two fathers to find their sons' house empty must have indeed been a shock; but they'd known this was the one day they'd be together and able perhaps to drag the lads away to Bree; and of course Frodo had planned for his letters to arrive too late for the recipients to try to track him down and cause him more distress. That both occurances happened on the same day was coincidence, of course--or as much a coincidence as can happen when the Creator has a hand in things, of couse.

For Brendi this must be excruciating, bound as he is to keep his employer's secrecy, and knowing his own grief for Frodo's leaving.

But the meeting with the King's kinsmen will happen.

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/25/2006
Oh! An Acceptable Sacrifice was Frodo's story. But now you continye with all of the others.How very wonderful!

Author Reply: Yes, we see how the others come to their most needed reconciliations with one another and the fact of Frodo's leaving. Hope this fulfills its promise.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/24/2006
I am so pleased to see this and to see Brendi again. I love that character. I found it ineresting thatSaradoc seems to know Pippin better than Paladin does in a way. Saradoc was wise to know Pippin's forgiving nature. Paladin must have made quite a scene when Pippin had his dream.
I could see both fathers worrying that Pippin and Merry were gone again. Naturally, it would be their first thought after what happened the last time and also Paladin't guilt must have been working on him as well. I am looking forward to more of this!

Author Reply: As you work through "The Acceptable Sacrifice" you'll see that last scene with Pippin, which is quite heartrending for Pippin, of course. Pal has seen the errors of his ways, however.

Saradoc has been seeing far more of Pippin, I suspect, since the two lads moved into Crickhollow than Pippin's parents have. Sara's in a better position to be certain Pippin's not changed that much than Paladin is.

And again, am so glad Brendi is appreciated as much as he is.

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/24/2006
Frodo's letter was very touching.

Author Reply: I'm so glad you found it so, Linda. Thanks for letting me know.

PeriantariReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/24/2006
I love this story so much already. I know i have to really catch up on "The Acceptable Sacrifice" but the summary you wrote made me so curious, i couldn't resist a peek. :)
I love your characterisations of Paladin and Saradoc, i love your dialogue and everything is written so very believable and indeed, how Merry, Pippin and Sam and their families had to deal with Frodo leaving is indeed interesting to investigate. I so admire your canonical nature and also the fact that you're willing to explore the things that Tolkien did not mention.
Thank you so much.
I look forward to more (while i catch up in "Sacrifice". :)

Author Reply: Thank you. I prefer canon, although I've been known to push the envelope on occasion--hopefully not too badly. To accept their new roles in life must have been difficult in many ways for those left behind. This is a far more focused story than "The Ties of Family"--or at least I HOPE so.

And thank you so very much for the compliments. I appreciate them a good deal right now, for I find I'm in need of them.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/24/2006
Oh, Larner! Thank you so much!! This is going to be wonderful!

I love Paladin and Saradoc here, with Paladin so filled with grief and remorse for his behavior, and Saradoc being so supportive.

And, oh the despair and worry at finding Crickhollow abandoned. Thank goodness for the Quick Post, and for the clues that enabled them to piece the story together. I look forward with gleeful anticipation to seeing the rest of this!

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! (((hugs Larner)))

*sits back and holds breath for next chapter*

Author Reply: You and Kitty put this plotbunny right in my lap, and I think it is actually a miniature nuzgul, myself. I certainly hope it doesn't get out of hand as so many of them seem to do!

To find the house empty must have been a shock; the reassurance that their sons would return must have been such a relief, and hopefully the taste of lembas helped in their healing.

SlightlyTookishReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/24/2006
Ooh! I enjoyed this very much! It's nice to read about Saradoc and Paladin, and of course they would have feared their sons had left again. I can't wait to see where this story goes.

Author Reply: Sara and Pal do this time have the limelight, at least in most of the chapters. They've had a scare, but hopefully they are relieved now that they aren't again in danger of losing their sons.

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/24/2006
A perfect start to this Larner. It links the two together so well but also stands alone. I look forward to seeing this period explored. And it was great to get back from my parents to be met by this!

Author Reply: Hope all is getting better for your mother. I continue to pray for her.

And I, too, felt this was a period that ought to be examined, particularly as Kitty and Dreamflower in especial asked for it.

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/24/2006
So wonderful to see another tale beginning so soon!

But oh dear, all who love Frodo have a lot to face, and very soon. Frodo's letter to Pippin brought tears to my eyes. I like seeing this from the point of view of some of Frodo's other relatives and friends.

I'm glad you've decided to explore this. I can't write such things--the grief tears so at the heart, and the memories it brings back to write of such loss are so depressing (I fear I would have given up long before Through the Flames was completed, if Antane hadn't wanted it so much), but one can't read/write only the good and pretend the bad isn't there. I look forward to more of this tale of reconciliation!
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: I thought this was due to a plotbunny, but I think that a small nuzgul was masquerading as a bunny this time. Shall we see where it leads?

But the questions posed by Dreamflower and Kitty needed to be answered, I find.

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