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Elf, Interrupted: Book One: Glorfindel Redux by Fiondil	1161 Review(s)
hawkeye	Reviewed Chapter: 53 on 1/22/2015
"Even as you and Glorfindel and Turgon and all the others were trudging across the Helcaraxë, we have been working towards this day when you are standing here in Lórien berating me." If I didn't know better, I think Irmo likes the way that Finrod is unintimidated by him. He's respectfully disrespectful, if there is such a thing smiles It reminded me of Glorfindel saying that Námo prefers people who stand up to him. While Finrod isn't being belligerent here, he's comfortable enough with himself that he doesn't have a problem telling everyone what he thinks. And, he seems to have got over worrying about what others think about him. I think having Glorfindel and Sador around have helped a lot. Irmo's explanation for his actions was thought provoking. Finrod did choose to obey, and I suppose that is an illustration of the blessing that comes from obedience. I really enjoyed seeing more of Irmo in this chapter. This is the first time, that I recall, of a Vala admitting to being wrong. They aren't Eru, but as "the powers" it's easy to slip into thinking of them as being perfect. I think what struck me most was how easily he admitted that the Valar were partly at fault for what happened. As a Vala, I think this really illustrates that true humility is power under control. Ultimately, everything is in accordance with Eru's will. The image of Námo and Irmo in mirror colours was fun. I can just see that too :) And Finrod, true to form, doesn't ever do anything half way. They ask him to think about it and he goes right on and makes a decision. Thank you for another fun and thought provoking chapter :) Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. Very much later in this story, Nienna and Ingwion have a discussion about the meaning of respect and how the Valar like it when the Elves stand up to them instead of groveling or accepting whatever they say as gospel, so to speak. Of course the key is, as you say, being respectfully disrespectful, something that Fëanor never was; he was just disrespectful toward all. I like your definition of humility as "power under control" rather than the usual subservient view of the word. And, of course, ultimately, all is in accordance to Eru's will. I liked the mirror image of Námo and Irmo, too. And no, Finrod never does anything half way, which is what I like about him. Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you found it fun as well as thought-provoking.

hawkeye	Reviewed Chapter: 52 on 1/21/2015
This was such an interesting chapter. On a side note, I've really enjoyed having Eärnur around again. Despite Finrod's status as apprentice, he seems years ahead of his friend now, which is an interesting contrast to where they were in Findaráto Diaries. Finrod is definitely acting the King in this chapter. The attitude of the journeymen and the master was disturbing. After nearly losing his life, Meneldil has some excuse of being snappy. That would leave anyone shaken. But his further reaction the journeymen seem more like the reactions of people who have been deprived of property than who have just witnessed a life saved. Going back to Finrod's own experiences in Lorien, it almost seems like the caregivers treat their patients rather as possessions than as people. Their attitudes are down right rude, and I would think that after he got over the shock, at the very least Meneldil would be grateful for the rescue. Laurendil was full of his own surprises too. He and Finrod, even though they are only recently reunited, work together pretty seamlessly. I love how Finrod was able to fluidly switch from being apprentice to being king. It will be interesting to see both of them work with Eärnur, and I wonder if, Finrod especially, might be a bit much for him to handle. It isn't a bad thing. Finrod is actually older, and I think that is beginning to show. Working with Mithlas might be just what Laurendil needs. Hopefully Mithlas is able to stay around some friendly people now :) Thanks for a fun read, Fiondil! Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. Eärnur will play an important role in this story, though we won't see that for some time, and Eärnur has had almost a century since Finrod was in Lórien as a newly released Reborn to advance in his studies. And he is a journeyman healer, so he's far above Finrod in that regard. And Meneldil and the other journeymen definitely have an attitude problem as we will see later. Laurendil is indeed full of surprises. Whatever his grievances toward Irmo, he is also a kingsman and Finrod's vassal and is acting accordingly, especially as he and Finrod are the only ones who actually know what is happening and what has to be done. We'll see how Mithlas fares now that Finrod and Laurendil have arrived and are aware of him and his situation. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for leaving a review. I appreciate it.

hawkeye	Reviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/20/2015
Wait! What happened to Glorfindel!? You can't be meaning to make me wait to find out cries Hmm. Where to start with this chapter. I really enjoyed seeing Finrod acting more as his old self. He handled Laurendil well. I'm a bit torn on what to feel about both Laurendil and Finrod in this chapter. I suppose I'll start with Laurendil. He definitely has some baggage, but that is probably true of most who left Aman. It's sad to think of him not being welcomed by his family, and one would that that Rialcar, being one of Arafinwë's advisors, would be more understanding. But I suspect there is probably a lot more going on as well. Laurendel's comment about wanting to escape "them" is very telling. I'm not sure what the story is there, but I suspect that, more than anything, Laurendil's parting with the Valar was less than happy. That is why Irmo really puzzles me in this chapter. So far, I've never seen, or even had the impression, that the Valar ever force themselves on anyone. Yet, it feels like Irmo is being very heavy handed in this chapter. Laurendil clearly wants nothing to do with him, but Irmo seems to have already decided that Laurendil is going to serve him. As a child of Eru, Laurendil doesn't belong to Irmo, so does Irmo even have the right to demand what he is? The sad thing is, I think Irmo probably really could help Laurendil if he would only allow the Vala to help. Laurendil is like most of us in that respect. He needs help, and probably is well aware of that, but for whatever reason is unwilling to accept that. I think too, he probably fears not only to see himself, but also to lose himself. In Endórë, like Finrod, he has a new life and a new identity. He naturally fears the destruction of his sense of self. On the one hand, I'm s bit surprised that Finrod hasn't said anything about Irmo's treatment of Laurendil. He knows, I think, that Irmo probably does have Laurendil's best interest at heart. Regardless, I hope that it doesn't backfire and something bad doesn't happen to Laurendil. I think Manwen will have a lot to say about that. Interestingly, I wonder if Manwen isn't part of the reason for the coolness between Laurendil and his atar. Irmo seems to be in quite the mood in this chapter grins Though his methods of taking on new apprentices did rankle a bit. I'm not surprised that Finrod was upset, but ironically I think it was good for Laurendil to not be the only one. Still, it seems like Finrod is being coerced into things. Regardless, Irmo is very devious, especially given what his future plans where. I found myself wanting to laugh and throw something at him at the same time. I wonder if Finrod felt the same way. Oh, is it twenty-four solar years? I think this interaction shows a lot of maturity for Finrod. His responses are by no means childish and I saw glimpses of the former King of Nargothrond throughout this chapter. Interesting that Irmo says that Laurendil is specifically running from him. It looks like Laurendil is going to face his fears whether he wants to or not. He doesn't seem to have the ability to say no to Irmo even when he does want to, though I got the feeling that Finrod might have been able to. But perhaps that is reading too much into things. "I am not as averse to the idea of being here as Laurendil, but I am a prince of the realm and have other duties. I cannot waste my days holding Laurendil’s hand... or anyone else’s for that matter." It does seem like an odd time to be taking Finrod from his atar. So does this mean that Arafinwë is a Manwendur? Thank you for another amazing chapter. There are so many possibilities for where things could go from here. Given that this is Finrod, I doubt that everything will go according to plan :) Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. We'll return to Glorfindel eventually. He's not going anywhere. grin We need to backtrack a bit and see what is happening with Finrod and later with Sador during this time. Eventually the three plotlines will meet, I promise, at least for a bit. As a Vala, Irmo isn't forcing himself on Laurendil, but he wants him as one of his healers because that is Laurendil's ultimate destiny as it is Finrod's, though his is a special case as we will see shortly. Finrod actually contemplated becoming a healer while he was in Lórien shortly after he was reborn, but the time wasn't right for him to take up such studies. At any rate, we'll see how both Ellyn handle their new roles over the next several chapters. Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate you taking the time to do so.

hawkeye	Reviewed Chapter: 50 on 1/14/2015
I'm still here! Though, I wasn't too sure after this past week. Whoever said being grown up was easy was clearly deranged ;) Despite the outcome, this was nicely played by Glorfindel. I love his observation about knowing when he is being followed. That is something, I think, few of the elves in Aman have learned. Perhaps it is time that they did? Something I've been noticing lately is how unaware these elves can be. I don't mean surroundings, though that did come in to play here, but just generally unaware. They are complacent. Despite living on the doorstep of Eru's vice-regent in Arda, they have almost completely lost sight of what it means to be one of the Valar. So much so that they actually believe that they can take one of their own to Lord Manwë's front doorstep and expect that he will never know. For them, I think, the Valar have become a "common" occurrence. They have become, like many common things, "safe". They have become like other elves, not like the powers that they are. Not all the elves in Aman are like this. I get the feeling that Ingwë and Valandur wouldn't fall into that trap. It all goes back to that conversation between the Valar about allowing the elves to think they are in control. As obvious as it looks from this perspective, we all fall victim to this mentality. It is the easiest thing in the world to get so used to something, extraordinary though it may be, that it becomes commonplace. Complacency is simple. Vorondil disgusted me in this chapter and I had to consciously remind myself of his age. I wish someone could turn him around, but I am finding that harder and harder to see. Tragically, he could have learned so much from Valandur if he had taken the opportunity when it was offered. As glad as I am that Glorfindel was not killed, I think the elves committing the attack made a grave mistake by not following through. As Manveru reflected, Glorfindel really is not someone to be trifled with. He might be hurt, but he is very much alive, and now he knows who his attackers are. This is yet another case of complacency on the part of these Vanyar. First and foremost, Glorfindel is a warrior and I have no doubt he will not stay down for long. Tulkas' reaction to Vorondil does not bode well for the ellon either. It's not wise to make any of the Valar upset, but getting an expression like that out of that particular Vala would have me running for cover... Not that it would do much good, but still :) Thank you for another wonderful chapter, Fiondil. Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. You're very right about the complacency and the unawareness. As they say, familiarity breeds contempt and the Elves of Aman to some extent are contemptuous of the Valar and the Maiar, thinking that they can get away with doing things without being noticed. Perhaps because the Valar don't appear to be doing anything to stop them makes them even more complacent. Vorondil... well, we'll just have to see. Right now he's not a very nice person and we will learn why that is much later in the story. For now, let us just say that the jury is still out where he's concerned. And no, Tulkas' reaction does not bode well for Vorondil or anyone else for that matter. Thanks for taking the time to review. It's very much appreciated.

hawkeye	Reviewed Chapter: 49 on 1/5/2015
Oh Vorondil. Are you really so... naive? I find it interesting how the different elves behave around the Valar. Ingoldo and Tinwetariel have lived near the Valar for Eru only knows how long. They fear them too, I think, on some level. But despite all that, neither one takes much thought to their actions. Vorondil is more difficult to read. On the one hand, he is a minor, and children can be cruel. It is sad to see someone so young (and an elf) being so hateful, and I have to wonder at his parents not keeping that in check. Interesting that Vorondil's father was in the war. Perhaps more disturbing than anything is I feel like Vorondil is being used. It's pretty obvious during that conversation that Ingoldo and Tinwetariel are leading him on. It's hard to believe that Ingoldo is Ingwë's brother. Hopefully Ingwë is keeping a close eye on him. After all this time, you can't say that he doesn't know how is brother is. At least I hope... Valandur fascinates me and I would love to read more about him. I will have to read In the High King's Secret Service 8D At any rate, I can't wait to see more of him here. At least Ingwë will know where Vorondil and Tulcaner went. And Ingwë. "What he said to the High King, no one ever learned, but within the hour, messengers were being sent to Taniquetil and Valmar under the High King’s seal." This really does show the truth of Ingwion's assessment that his father, while angry, isn't cutting any ties with the Valar. Even assuming that he doesn't know what the Valar are up to, he is astute enough to move now. I would be interested to know how much of a role Valandur played here too. I wonder if he knew that Vorondil lied. As old as Valandur and Ingwë must be, their ability to read people must go far beyond Vorondil's. I actually feel bad for Vorondil, as much as I dislike him. He is obviously deeply conflicted. On the one hand, he is in awe of these renown warriors and the fact that he can't be one of them must feel unbearable. He is very petty though, and his hatred, wherever it comes from, makes him a target. His reaction to Sador's initiation was despicable. Hopefully he doesn't end up like Ingoldo and his wife, but I don't hold out a lot of hope right now. Now what has happened to Glorfindel!? Thanks for another exciting chapter, Fiondil :) Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. Vorondil is the equivalent of an 16-year old, so yeah, he can be very naive when it comes to the adult world. We'll learn eventually what motivates his hatred later. The same with Ingoldo. Valandur is a fascinating ellon and I hope you do get to read "In the High King's Secret Service" someday and learn how he came to be where he is now. I have no doubt that he knew that Vorondil was being less than truthful. And Ingwë is first and foremost the High King and however angry he might be, he knows his duty both to his people and to the Valar. Vorondil is deeply conflicted and therein lies the seed of his downfall as we will eventually see. As for what happened to Glorfindel, we will see that in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. It's much appreciated.

hawkeye	Reviewed Chapter: 48 on 1/3/2015
Another amazing chapter. Whenever I read about Glorfindel's discoveries, I smile. He feels, in some ways, very young here, but I think that is more my perception than anything else. In some ways, society almost conditions us to lose the joy and wonder in the world around us. It sees that as childish. But really, I think the people who preserve that wonder and joy have the right of it. I hope he never grows up in this respect. There were many surprises in this chapter. The revelation that, when summoned by the Elder King, Glorfindel also needs his leave to depart disturbed me as well. It's no different, I suppose, than being summoned by any other great king, but it still felt odd. For Glorfindel, this is where things start to go wrong. His mood changes drastically from here on, and he seems to retreat into himself and to even become more cunning. It's also telling that the others don't pick up on things sooner, something which might not have happened had Finrod been around. Regardless, not taking Ingwion was unwise in Glorfindel's part and, I think, on Ingwion's. Interesting that Glorfindel was "permitted" to go to the Ring of Doom. With all the uncloaked Maiar intervention lately, especially at the meeting with Lord Ulmo and the warning against visiting there by Lord Námo's Maia, it's surprising he was not redirected. The Valar are obviously playing things close for now, but it will be interesting to see how Glorfindel takes all of this. He is, after all, still quite "young" and his ability to process all these things might be a problem. It will also be interesting to see how this plays out from the Valar's end. Manwë came down quite hard on Námo for not getting Glorfindel and Alassiel's permission for his earlier intervention. Here again, the elves have not been consulted, but I feel like there are bigger issues at stake. Ultimately the Valar have everyone's best interest in mind. "Ingwion was forced to acquiesce, not willing or perhaps unable to articulate his concerns in such a way as to make any sense to the others." I can really sympathise with Ingwion here, despite the fact that I disagree with him. As haryon of the Ingaran, as Arafinwë's elder, he could have made things happen. Then again, hindsight is always 20/20. On a side note, there is something about Ingwion that just feels... "young" I guess. Perhaps some of this comes in on your previous writings (which I can't wait to read). Granted, we still haven't seen much of him, but something about him feels lacking given his position. Perhaps I'm overreacting here :) Regardless, Ingwion certainly has plenty of pluck. I'm not sure many people would have had the nerve to march in on Lord Manwë like that. For Ingwion though, I think it's an attempt to regain himself after failing. He probably wishes he hadn't let Glorfindel out of his sight. I cheered when I saw Lord Oromë (even if it was under stressful circumstances). You have such a wonderful way of writing all of the Valar. The fact that Glorfindel is the bait at least gives me hope that the Valar know where he is. Despite Manwë's enigmatic response, I don't think Glorfindel will end up dead. I have a feeling Námo would be extremely displeased with that arrangement, not to mention Finrod ;) Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. Ingwion was reminding Glorfindel that there are protocols that must be observed, so when Manwë summoned him, he was not immediately free to just leave but needed Manwë's permission to do so, just as he would have needed Ingwë's or Arafinwë's permission to leave their presence after they had summoned him. There is really nothing odd about that, but certainly what followed here was, shall we say, planned by others. Glorfindel needed to remain in Valmar for reasons other than his own as we will see. Ingwion has his own issues that stem from the time of the Darkening and if you ever get around to reading "In Darkness Bound" you might begin to understand where he's coming from. He's not really "young" but he certainly is insecure, at least in this instance. At the end of the chapter, he's anything but, and certainly he blames himself for Glorfindel being missing, though he does not realize that higher powers, literally, are at work here. And of course Glorfindel does not end up dead, since we all know he eventually goes back to Middle-earth, but that doesn't mean he won't get hurt along the way. ;) Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it very much.

hawkeye	Reviewed Chapter: 47 on 12/18/2014
I think I would almost have been afraid to eat if I thought another spiral might be forthcoming. Thankfully there is another way out :) The spiral itself is really interesting to me, and I wonder why Lord Námo has it. By his own admission, he does nothing without a reason. Life is like that too. Often times, even seemingly random events do have a reason in the bigger picture. There are a lot of Maiar in this chapter. Seeing so many, even unnamed, really is like a window into another world. They take joy in serving their lords, much like the Children take joy in serving Atar as they should. It's like a picture of how things ought to be. As the designers of living things, I can only imagine what a Vala's garden would be like :) Ulmo is an interesting Vala, especially here. In this chapter, I see him as being more than just Lord of Waters. He, like the other Valar, are concerned with more than just the science and mechanics of their creations. I also thought it was interesting that he offers aid, but stops at direct intervention and I wonder if this has always been their policy, or if they make exceptions based on what they see in the future. "We do not always succeed, but we never stop trying." From my perspective, I think perhaps the elves of Aman do not know or have not acknowledged this. If the Valar are perfect and all-knowing, then it is easy to blame them for whatever happens in Aman or elsewhere. Or perhaps, it is easier to not take responsibility themselves. In a case such as the elves leaving Aman, all parties are usually at fault in some manner. But, that is just conjecture at this point. I really enjoy the bits of elvish you put in to the stories. It really adds a lot, and as a a linguist, makes me extremely happy. Just thought I'd share that :) Have a lovely week! Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. Ulmo has always been a champion of the Eldar even those who rebelled. It was he who lead Tuor to Gondolin as well as inspiring Turgon to build the hidden city and he did the same for Finrod, inspiring him to build Nargothrond. And all the Valar have learned the lesson of direct intervention. They can inspire and plead but they cannot coerce. You're right that some of the Eldar just don't understand what Ulmo is saying here. The Valar are not perfect, never have been, though they continually strive to do Eru's will in all things. Like all created beings, they fall short of the glory, but they never give up, they never succumb to despair and they live in hope that in the end Eru will right all wrongs. I'm glad you enjoy the elvish. I try to be as accurate with it as is possible given what (little) we actually know of the languages as Tolkien has given us. Having a background in linguistics myself, though I am not a professional linguist, has helped. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate it very much.

hawkeye	Reviewed Chapter: 46 on 12/17/2014
It looks like Finrod has had quite a shock now too. I thought it was interesting that Manwë seemed to be well aware of the conversation even though he was not present. Is that true of all the Valar that they know what the others are doing? In any case, Atar and Manwë appear to be on top of things. Hopefully neither of the elves will be too seriously affected. With all that has been happening lately, I think it is significant that Námo gave Glorfindel "permission" to be angry. So often people look at anger itself as bad, but it is a natural emotion. Like Námo said though, it needs to be properly placed and (I hope) channeled in the right direction. Though they don't show it, I imagine the Valar are equally frustrated at not having any answers to what has been happening. I'm really enjoying reading about Manwë, especially in the context of the other Valar. One think that I've been noticing about him is humility. As the Elder King of Arda, he doesn't insist on always being the centre of attention, in fact a lot of the time he isn't. He seems to be the calm stabilising force a lot of the time. Anyway, I really enjoy him. Námo wasn't too bad at this party laughs Still, the Valar really know how to throw one. Glorfindel will remember that for the rest of his life. I admit, I got a little misty eyed at times :) Hopefully Aulë's ring will help. One thing that I find amazing is Ingwion and Indil really do view Glorfindel as family and a "brother" to Finrod. So often, at least in our world, the term family gets thrown around a lot, but when it really comes down to it, everyone knows its not serious. At least in this case, it seems to be different for the elves. Seeing Olórin is always a highlight. But the presence of so many Maiar guards makes me uneasy. Since this is Glorfindel, there must be more adventure on the way :D Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. Well, the Valar (and Maiar) are spiritual beings who normally communicate telepathically, so even as he was seeing to Ingwion, he was keeping an eye on what was happening in Lórien. Manwë is pretty cool. I've grown to like him a lot as I've been writing my stories. He does have great humility, but he's not afraid to exert his authority as Elder King whenever necessary. In my story, Wars of the Valar, where the Valar are generally in spiritual rather than in physical form and I described them via their particular aurae, Manwë is always a steady blue no matter what is going on even though everyone else around him is pretty much having kittens. Having someone remaining calm under all circumstances does help. grin And Olórin is always a treat to write. Thanks for reviewing. It's much appreciated.

hawkeye	Reviewed Chapter: 45 on 12/17/2014
"You must be a lot of fun at parties." I knew it! Vala he may be, but Lord Námo has a strange sense of humour. At any rate, that line about made me inhale my tea coughs Things felt confusing here, like two worlds colliding and rolling down a hill. I'm sure it probably felt the same for the elves. Having Ulmo be a chief engineer makes a lot of sense. In fact, it reminded me of a couple of friends who studied ocean engineering in University. Ingwion really does show a lot of courage here in what has to be very traumatic circumstances. The part about their bond of friendship was interesting. I really like the idea of the eldar being able to form bonds involving their fëar. That bond of brotherhood alone had a hugely stabilising effect on Glorfindel here. I am intrigued to see where the Valar are headed with this. They almost seem to be playing, and I can only imagine what happens when the powers start having too much fun :) I'd say I feel sorry for Irmo, but, well, it's just too amusing. Nobody seems overly upset, so hopefully everything is fine. I'm wondering if Námo is going to be in trouble with Irmo ;) Hope you're having a fun week! Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. Things are very confusing in this chapter. We see the Valar as the scientists that they are but through the eyes of Elves who are unfamiliar with that part of the Valar's role. And they are not playing. They are honestly intrigued by the differences between the Reborn and the Once-born and they are puzzled by the way Glorfindel is acting when he slips his leash. As Manwë point's out some of the Elves are doing something they shouldn't be able to do and they are trying to discover why. As for Irmo, well, he's used to weird things happening around him anyway. grin Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it.

hawkeye	Reviewed Chapter: 44 on 12/16/2014
Well Ingwion has at least inherited Ingwë's temper. The Maiar seem to take it in stride though. Having years of experience with the Children and their moods probably helps. In some ways, particularly here, the Maiar remind me a lot of the Valar, caring but seemingly enigmatic in their ways. It almost reminds me of the (often annoying) way that adults treat children. I can sympathise with Ingwion getting frustrated. His long experience with the Valar will, hopefully, prove helpful in this case. The escort was a shock, and I wonder, despite Maranwë's words, if there isn't more to it than that. The Valar obviously expect something to happen. In fact, they seem to be trying to provoke something into happening. From some of your comments earlier about the power of a Maia, having fourteen show up does seem like a lot. I think the escort might be the Valar's way of showing that they all have an interest in the outcome of what they will learn from Ingwion and Glorfindel. "Her voice was as musical as the nightingale and Glorfindel thrilled at the sound of it." This made me pause. The Maiar are closer to Atar than the Eldar. It reminded me a bit of the responses of a mortal when they hear an angel; a being who is both higher and good. The role reversal, albeit brief, between Ingwion and Glorfindel shows again the special relationship that the Reborn have with the Valar. While many of the Eldar look on it with mistrust, it really is a beautiful thing. Ingwion was pretty much cheating by making that an order laughs That aside, the spiral was hugely disconcerting. I'm pretty sure just looking at it would give me motion sickness XD Calling Námo "Tiutalero" is beautiful. I think I will call him that from now on, at least when I think of him :) Of all the descriptions of the Valar so far, this is the one I love best. I think one of the things that makes Námo, and all the other Valar, as wonderful as he is is his being both Judge and Consoler. That really is what goodness and Truth are. In the terrifying edge is also the greatest comfort because, in the end, comfort needs strength to have its full effect. Thank you for a lovely chapter! Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. Well, Glorfindel did say that he knew the escort was for him, but sometimes it's best not to read too much into a thing even if the Valar are involved. Tiutalero, "Comforter/Consoler", is Námo's favorite title and the role he most prefers to play. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate it.

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