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| Night On A Bare Mountain by Jay of Lasgalen | 14 Review(s) |
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| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/9/2007 |
| Oh, My! That's a good way to end this chapter, has me wondering who could possible be on the outside of the cave. Elrohir woke, but he sure isn't well, and Elladan is tending to him, and they are out there alone. Please update soon...Great job! Author Reply: Well, Elohir's awake, which has to be a good sign. Elladan is with him, which is even better. As for what is outside - wait and see! | |
| MithLuin | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/8/2007 |
| Oh, you are cruel! Not to let us know what is out there.... I hope it is merely Glorfindel, but I'm not sure I trust you ;). Good to see Elrohir awake and alert, though Elladan was pestering him, wasn't he? Thanks for the update, and looking forward to more! Author Reply: Glorfindel? It might be :>) You'll have to wait and see. Elrohir is feeling a lot better, and it helps him to know that Elladan is there, depite his pestering. More soon! | |
| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/8/2007 |
| Well isnt that nice! Just leave us all hanging, I could almost feel Elrohirs headache you described it so well,I dont know what else to say ,my mind is fryed today! LOL Author Reply: Poor Elrohir - he's not feeling too good, but he knows that Elladan is near, and that helps him more than anything else can. As for the cliffhanger - just watch Morel's reaction :) | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/8/2007 |
| Well that was nasty ending! Before that, I was mostly shuddering over the blizzard and the cold. It was too much like what's been outside for the last couple of weeks. But I could also feel the peace that each brother felt in the other's presence. Which I suppose is why the ending seemed particularly nasty! Author Reply: You know me and cliffhangers! But as a hint to what's happening, look at Morel's reaction ;) I'm glad you could feel the blizzard and cold. It was quite hard to write like that, as spring has sprung here, and the weather is warm and mild (mostly). The way I see the twins, they draw a lot of strength and comfort from the other. It will help Elrohir just to have Elladan nearby, and Elladan can relax now that he knows Elrohir will recover. | |