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| On the Wings of the Storm by Lialathuveril | 12 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 2/16/2009 |
| Ah, a proper first Yule for husband and wife as they prepare for the child to come and see the first fruits of the new order. And Erchirion has a love amongst the Rohirrim, does he? A triple tie now between Gondor and Rohan! Love the teasing of the husband and the baiting of the lady's maid! No, I don't think she'll stay in Rohan! Heh! Wonderful tale, and look to seeing more in time. And I'll be thinking about your original work! Author Reply: Hello Larner, yes, I wanted to bring the story full circle again to Yule to show the difference. And quite a few of my readers asked what would become of the twins, so I thought I'd give a glimpse of their future as well. It's good to hear you liked the story and thank you for reviewing! Lia | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 2/16/2009 |
| Lovely conclusion, Lia. Lothiriel's maid is hilarious. She needs to get away! I like the contrast of the women all warm inside and the snow coated men who return from their ride. Author Reply: Hello Daw, I get the feeling that Lothiriel's maid will accept that offer of retirement soon! And I'm pleased to hear that you liked the conclusion to this tale. Thanks for reviewing and until another time! Lia | |