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Just A Cold  by Aelaer 14 Review(s)
pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/20/2008

Very good.

Aragorn is sick for once and ignores it. It nice to see him sneak off, and farimir helping him, even that one guard seem to notice.

Very nice...



Author Reply: Thank you!

After my first reading of the Houses of Healing chapter, especially the last paragraph, I've been half convinced that he often cares more about the health of others than himself. Fanon doesn't help in this regard either ;P

Kitt OtterReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/20/2008
The scenes between Faramir and Aragorn are so funny; I can just see Faramir's eyebrows contracting and detracting. But poor Aragorn! You describe his coming cold in such a way I started to feel ill. (I mean this in a good way. *grin*)
I hope Aragorn knows what he is doing... or will Faramir need to save him?
-Kitt

Author Reply: I blame all descriptions on personal experience. *winces* Saving? Why would the king need to be saved? Surely he would *never* get himself in trouble... *cough* ;) Thanks for the review.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/20/2008
Oh dear, I think our stubborn King is in for a rough time. I hope there's lots of love and healing along the way. :)

Author Reply: *thinks about it for a moment* Love and healing? Never heard of it. *halo falls off of head* Ah, no worries, he'll be fine- eventually. Thanks for the review ;)

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/20/2008
An enjoyable start to your story.I liked the scenes for Aragorn and Faramir. Poor aragorn sounds as if he is getting flu or something.

Author Reply: Thank you! Yes, flus tend to be rather annoying and bothersome, don't they?

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