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To See A World  by Nightwing 13 Review(s)
fliewatuetReviewed Chapter: 19 on 4/21/2004
Sorry for not reviewing the previous chapter, but rest assured that I am still reading and thoroughly enjoying this story. My favourite part was Legolas and Aragorn sorting out their troubles with the entire situation. Only when Legolas named Aragorn's contradictory behaviour did I notice it as well. Kudos to you for including those things so subtly into the story (or blame on me for not paying closer attention).

And I am glad that Legolas picked up his bow again. I am quite certain that his arrow will hit the mark (or come very close to it), but I bet that Aragorn will not be excessively bothered with retrieving Legolas' arrows.

sofiaReviewed Chapter: 19 on 4/20/2004
i'd like to see an elf glow red!
He let the arrow go. He let the arrow go! Oh my... I believe in him! he is an elf after all...

Kitt of LindonReviewed Chapter: 19 on 4/20/2004
Ending the chapter like that! I cannot wait to see if it hits, (though I think it will, but I may be wrong!)

'watching his friend's long fingers sweep over his bow with the same love and familiarity as a harper who gently caresses the strings of his instrument before making music.'

-I love that line, it is lovely.

I'm glad that Legolas still isn't mad at Aragorn. I'd imagine that an Elf glowing red would be quite unnerving. (Or is Aragorn's imagination getting the better of him?)

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