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The Abduction of Éomer, King of Rohan  by Lialathuveril 103 Review(s)
whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 11 on 6/13/2010
Lothy seems to trust Leona completely here, which is a good sign. The first time I read this it seemed very encouraging to me. Found myself wishing that he had "confessed" to her before all of this ever happened but then, it would have led them elsewhere.

Author Reply: Yes, I agree. I think that in an emergency Lothiriel's true feelings take over, so she just does as he tells her, like you said, trusting him blindly.

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 10 on 6/13/2010
I loved the details in this chapter--the young runaway couple make a nice "mirror" of Leona and Lothy. I feel a bit sorry for Leona here because it's obvious he's working up some nerve to tell her something.

Author Reply: Hello whitewave,
first of all sorry for not answering sooner - with the school year winding down, life's been a bit crazy around here!

And since you've been reading on, you know that soon there is even more reason to feel sorry for Léona ;-)

Thanks for taking the time to review!
Lia

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 5/18/2010
An enjoyable ending to a most enjoyable story. Thank you for a great read! I would have nominated this for MEFA,but was beaten to it.

Author Reply: Hello Linda,
I'm pleased to hear you enjoyed the ride! Thank you for taking the time to review and all the best for your own writing endeavours.

Lia

IdhresselReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2010
Hi, I'm relatively new to this world of fanfic. Only read the first chapter, but this is really good! It's great to read something like this - very enjoyable. Thanks for the interesting story, Idhressel xxx

Author Reply: Hello Idhressel,
I'm pleased to hear you liked the first chapter. It's not a terribly serious story, but was fun to write ;-)

Thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoy the rest as well.
Lia

RadbooksReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 5/13/2010
A very well told tale that I really enjoyed!! Thanks for sharing it with us!

Author Reply: Hello Radbooks,
thank you, it was a privilege sharing this tale with you!

Lia

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 5/13/2010
I wanted to tell you how much I loved this story, it was such an adventure! I admire the way you write Eomer ,you really know how to bring him to life and his lady also, hope you will write somemore soon (aren't I greedy) but I just can't help myself it's so good. Hugs The Imp

Author Reply: Hello Imp,
it was a lovely adventure for me to write the story, too. As for more tales about this couple, for the time being I want to return to an idea for an original story that got interrupted by this plot bunny. However, I probably wont be able to keep my paws off my favourite horselord for too long ;-)

Thanks for reviewing!
Lia

Mysterious JediReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 5/12/2010
I very much enjoyed this story! Great humor, great romance. I appreciate the lack of...over-descriptiveness.

Author Reply: Hello Jedi,
it's definitely one of my less serious stories ;-) And I'm pleased to hear you think I got the right balance with descriptions.

Thanks for reviewing and may the Force be with you!
Lia

FantasiaReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 5/12/2010
Love your story, all your stories.
I laugh wiht the neckless dscription, cabbages...


Author Reply: Hello Fantasia,
the cabbages just proliferated through the story!

Thanks for reviewing.
Lia

VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 5/12/2010
He gave her a necklace of golden cabbages? Lol! And what a nice touch that they're planning to visit teh young couple they'd helped, that is a really satisfying aspect. Well, I wish them much joy on their belated honeymoon!

Author Reply: Hello Virtuella,
a friend at my writing group actually suggested the necklace, so the honour for the idea goes to Drummerwench. However, I turned it into furled roses ;-) And I thought I'd tie up a few loose ends with the epilogue as well.

Thanks for reviewing!
Lia

KatsterReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 5/12/2010
Very well done. I was hoping we'd get to experience another abduction!

Author Reply: Hello Katster,
well, they would probably have to agree first on who gets to abduct whom ;-)

Thanks for reviewing!
Lia

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