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Homecomings  by Jay of Lasgalen 16 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/10/2011
Aha! Foiled by brothers from the full weight of his victory! Love how you used the prompt.

Author Reply: Thank you! I felt rather sorry for Elladan here :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/10/2011
Aha! And I do think that their father won in the end!

Author Reply: Yes - he doesn't care who wins, as long as they're home!

Idril CelebrindalReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/8/2011
Thanks Jay! I enjoyed all three chapters so far, keep them coming!

Idril

Author Reply: Thank you! They're fun to write :)

eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/8/2011
Wait, how the heck did my sons end up in your story. LOL. I feel Lord Elronds pain. "it was not my fault" will go down in annals of time as the most used excuses right along with "I don't know".

Thanks for the wonderful read Jay

Author Reply: There's a lot of my son in this, too. His favourite excuse was "I didn't drop it, it fell!"

ellieReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/7/2011
LOL! I love these! Precious and priceless! And it was nice of you to let Elladan win at least once *snicker*

It is always a pleasure to read a story you have penned or typed. LOL

Author Reply: I'm not sure Elladan appreciates his win!

Thank you for your comments. It's good to be writing again.

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/7/2011
LOL. Male children! They're all alike, no matter what race.

Author Reply: Oh, yes. When my son came home from a camping and hiking weekend I made him leave his clothes by the door!

(I don't think SoA likes you, Daw. It never sends me alerts of your reviews.)

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