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On Your Mark  by Grey Wonderer 12 Review(s)
Celeste Lucretia BlackReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/15/2021
I'm definitely favouriting this

eilujReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/24/2012

My mother used graph paper. She always had things figured out ahead of time. (We moved a lot.)

Luckily my father left the furniture-arranging to her. Unfortunately, the time they moved after he retired, he thought he should help. It was years before all the pictures were up on the walls.

This story was a great deal of fun, though if it was up to me, I'd probably have committed violence ... no, I'd have Gone Mad before it came to that. Your Pip is amazing. (And a few other words, too.)

I hope we will be seeing more stories from you.

Some sort of Ooops:

“Did your Eglantine really tell you this story?" -- I'm not quite sure what the problem is, but it is. Your Aunt Eglantine? Your mother Esmeralda?

And lest you feel too bad about that ... it was a good while there before I could remember Merry's mother's name....

Author Reply: Sorry for the unfortunate typo re Merry's mother's name. I have corrected it. I do know that Eglantine is Pippin's mother and Esmeralda is Merry's mother. I just typed in the wrong one in my rush to complete this. Also, as you probably noticed, the sentence did not read correctly even had I used the proper name. I was, as Treebeard might say, too hasty in posting.

I think I need to take a break from writing and your review has helped me see that. It was a careless mistake and I am surprised that other people didn't mention it. Thank you for your honesty. Enjoy your holiday season, and again, I apologize.

kelsin79Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/17/2012
I was so thrilled to see a new story from you. I love your hobbit stories!

Author Reply: Well, thank you very much! I love this review that you've left for me. Seriously, thank you for reading!

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/11/2012
“There you go again, using my proper name as if I were some stranger with whom you felt the need to be formal,” Pippin sighed.

“You are a bit strange,” Merry smiled.

ROTFL! Great dialogue and great story! And I've learned an additional meaning of Bench Mark ;-)

Author Reply: I am very pleased that you enjoyed this and thank you for reviewing it. And wow! It was educational too? That doesn't happen that often. : )

AndreaReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/11/2012
LOL! I like your prologues :-)

Author Reply: Why, thank you! They are very fond of you also.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/2/2012
This is so adorable! I'm slowly catching up, and this delightful tale gave me huge grins. It's so.... you! :)

Author Reply: Awwww, thank you! I'm glad you are back on line again. You were missed.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/1/2012
bench marks! Haw!

(“Only the Tooks,” Frodo muttered, shaking his head.)

You have done your usual marvellous wild-and-woolly conversation that doesn't make sense and then, somehow, it does. You haven't lost your touch!

Thanks for the smile.

Author Reply: Thank you so much and I really appreciate the review. I don't write much anymore and so, when I do, it's lovely to hear from old friends. Hope you and your family are well. Take care!

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/1/2012
Ah, but you know I love your prologues...

Author Reply: I am afraid I skimped a bit on this one. It's so good to hear from you by the way. I've missed you. : )

ArmarielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/31/2012
Very cute story! Let's hope the landlord doesn't find out about that extra big bench mark.....;)


Author Reply: Thank you for reviewing. Yeah, if the Land Lord found out, that would be bad. : )

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/29/2012
I must admit that sometimes Tookish reasoning tends to boggle the mind!

Author Reply: It does unless you are another Took.

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