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Ransom  by MP brennan 11 Review(s)
UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 9 on 4/22/2013
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH you have a genius for cliffhangers in two places no less. Excellent use of the Gondorian sword to identify the grown Hakim. I am anxious for the rest of that scene. You surprised me with the manacles. I did not think Azzim would chain Aragorn. Good job and I a, most anxious for Thursday. I did not know you were so young and a student. You make a fantastic writer so will are likely to be even better as a vet.

Author Reply: Thanks for the awesome review! Yeah, I guess I've outed myself. ;) I was still a teenager when I started posting back in '08 and I've chosen a path of Neverending Schoolwork. I'm glad you liked this chapter and especially glad that parts of it surprised you and caught your attention. I hope you enjoy the rest of this tale!

-Brennan

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