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| Ransom by MP brennan | 11 Review(s) |
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| UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 4/28/2013 |
| Great chapter, but you still like your cliffhangers too much. Making us wait, again, for Aragorn to smile at Hakim is too much! Good imagery in this chapter. I like the part about the flowers. I was wondering about the ring and how it would be returned. You handled that extremely well. Thank you so much | |