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Elf Academy 4 - The Unfinished Tales  by Fiondil 539 Review(s)
obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 59 on 4/6/2017
Uh, oh... every time someone says something like "What could go wrong?" It goes wrong. Let's just hope it doesn't go too badly for our guys. I kind of like Rufus. He might be sleazy, but I can't decide if he can't be redeemed or if he will turn into a bad guy for our heroes.

Artelemnar FŽanestarReviewed Chapter: 59 on 4/6/2017
WOW, I want a lock like that on my bike XD I can just about imagine myself singing The Eldar, by Blind Guardian every time I need my bike to go to school

Glorfindel being able to fly a plane should not have surprised me.

Alex feeling uneasy worries me... He wouldn't feel like that for no reason...

I really love that Coleman's actually exists. The attention to detail in Fiondil's stories is incredible.

Thank you for sharing yet another great chapter with us :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 59 on 4/5/2017
And were the little people he saw Hobbits, I wonders? Heh!

Sounds as if Colemans would be a perfect place to visit--but not at the height of summer with the humidity high!

SharonbReviewed Chapter: 59 on 4/5/2017
Hmm, we never like it when Alex has premonitions. Hopefully it won't be too bad. And Rufus doesn't like being shown up by the elves. Poor guy.

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 57 on 4/1/2017
At least Alex told someone although in a rather oblique way about Prof. Redelfs. I'm still worried about him. We all assume that anyone who is an elf is on our side, but maybe not...

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 58 on 3/30/2017
They do say the best defense is a good offense, and Meriwether is giving that. Now, if Alex doesn't get shut outside....

Love Glorfindel's statement here.

SoledadReviewed Chapter: 58 on 3/30/2017
I wish NŠmo would opt for having the goggles, too. That would have been sooo very steampunk! I see Gwyn and Alex are bonding in a way none of the other Elves would be able to do, IMO. I hope it turns out well for them.

Thank you again for doing this, and looking forward in excitement for the continuation.

SharonbReviewed Chapter: 58 on 3/30/2017
I almost feel sorry for Rufus now that he has been "Namoed" as Derek put it. I do wonder who Louise was that meant so much to him. And I think Alex is doing better than most think, he realizes who he needs to be for this. Let's just hope and pray that he can come back to Alex without much trouble after this is over.

I'll add my thanks for your effort to continue the story line through to the end. We'll gladly take any updates whenever you can get them to us. Getting that far into another person's head cannot be an easy task.

GwedReviewed Chapter: 58 on 3/29/2017
I can imagine I speak for everyone when I say I don't know if there are enough words to express how much I appreciate your decision to try and complete this story. Because wow. And thank you. I was just going to beg you, in the event you elected not to, that perhaps you could just release Fiondil's notes to the public instead so that we might have some idea what was supposed to happen or how it was supposed to end.

That said, really, thank you. I don't envy you the task. While it's almost like just how we try to get in Tolkien's mind when writing fanfiction, Fiondil's imagination is quite the undertaking. :) But I can't think of anyone who can write his characters as closely as he did than you two, especially Glorfindel. I'll admit, I can't wait for the story to focus on him again and was so saddened to find out it wouldn't be the case (when you announced we were coming to the end of the written chapters). Now I'm certainly smiling again.

Thank you for doing this for us and for him. Really can't tell you how much it means.

Artelemnar FŽanestarReviewed Chapter: 58 on 3/28/2017
Uh oh, I have a bad feeling about this...
I do hope nothing bad happens on the way, but this just can't not go wrong.
I'm really worried for Alex, is going to be allright?
I kind of want to know who Louise is now and I almost feel sorry for Rufus, he's going to have nightmares about that "chat" for the rest of his life.
Great chapter, as always :)

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