| Repercussions by French Pony | 13 Review(s) |
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| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/27/2003 |
| I couldn't help myself and already went over to ff.net and finished this story but I think I will continue to read it as you post, that way I take it slower and can take in more. Poor, Sam the sorrow at finding his Dad and yet he found his two kids again. What emotions! Poor, Merry worried and pushed right over the edge into a feint. This is really such a wonderful story, thank you! |
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| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/25/2003 |
| Yipes! Oh, dear there are too many problems it seems. I hope you will be fast with an update so that I can read more! I'm anxious to find out that happens!! |
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| Rose Gamgee | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/24/2003 |
Ooh, yay! I was hoping you'd post this here, so that I could review it by chapter (I have it on my favorites list at FFN, but have yet to review it there).
First of all, I love your writing style. Easy to follow, but not boring, and really good with details. Your dialogue is great, too. You're also doing a great job with characterization. And I love how you described the fire at the end . . . subtle, like the start of the fire itself. Okay, not sure if that made any sense, but I hope you get the idea . . . :-P Anyway, I wish I could give you better feedback, but I really do love this story. I'm almost dreading re-reading the upcoming chapters; they were so heartbreaking . . . Ah well, great job! I'm looking forward to more! |
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