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| The Vault of Annúminas by shirebound | 16 Review(s) |
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| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/26/2007 |
| A very exciting chapter.I'm longing to see what Scamp discovered. I like to picture Aragorn singing too in my stories,though I think he has a wonderful voice! Author Reply: I'm glad you're enjoying this, Linda. I would love to hear Aragorn, Elladan, and Frodo singing together! | |
| Mairi | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/25/2007 |
| I love the way you write the hobbits. They're so very... hobbity, for lack of a better word. In fact, all the characters are very nicely done. Your dialogue could use a tiny bit of help, but it's nothing really. Nice work! Author Reply: Thank you, Mairi. "Hobbity" is what I strive for, in addition to making sure Frodo is cared for, respected, and loved. | |
| lbilover | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/22/2007 |
| Ooh, I'm so anxious for the next chapter now, to discover what is behind the door and more about who made it and everything. Clever Scamp!!! :) Author Reply: Thank you! I'm anxious for the next chapter too, and am having a wonderful time writing it. Finally we're going to find out what's hidden in the ancient city, wheee! That's one clever doggie (and hobbit), what a terrific team. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/22/2007 |
| Dust of pearl and opal? Right, I think, for the lands and halls of Elendil. Now, to find where they lead. Bless small Scamp, and her blessed young master. Author Reply: Frodo and Scamp make a perfect detective team, don't they? This is a fun story to write. :) | |
| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/21/2007 |
| Wow, with a little bit of luck, they have found what they were looking for. Like the bath time song, hobbits do like their comforts, nothing like a hot bath. Author Reply: The "Baggins Boys" do seem to carry quite a bit of luck around with them. :) | |
| Tigger | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/21/2007 |
| Yes, once again Scamp has found treasure of some sort. Now, what's behind that door? Hmmmm? I've been loving this story since you started it. I'm sorry I've been rather missing in action w/the reviews, but I've really not been feeling that great lately. I've done more reading than reviewing of just about everyone these days. Anyway...I love the idea of ground opal dust being part of the covering of a secret passage's floor. It is my birthstone after all, so... ;o) Can't wait to see what Frodo, Aragorn, Elladan and the ever seeking Scamp find behind that door!! :oD Great addition as always. :o) Author Reply: Tigger, I know you're reading and enjoying, and that's what matters. Just take good care of yourself. Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I'm hard at work on chapter 12. :) | |
| aprilkat | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/20/2007 |
| The treasure hunt is on! And the puppy has taken them straight to it, it seems! I can't wait to see what they find! I love the opening with them singing Frodo's bathing song. What an image that is. Author Reply: Go puppy go! Yes, we're getting closer to whatever there is to find. Hobbit bath songs... just couldn't resist having everyone sing one. *grins* | |
| Mysterious Jedi | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/20/2007 |
| Excellent, as always. I'm glad Elladan and Aragorn like Frodo's song. I never thought about Elladan and Elrohir's names reflecting their gifts, before. Plenty of fluff, as I've come to expect from you. I look forward to more. Author Reply: Thank you, MJ. There's no getting away from the fluff! I'm so happy you're enjoying the story. :) | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/20/2007 |
| OOo. Narsil! Ooo. Fairy dust! (ok, not really, but opal dust and pearl dust sound somehow mysterious and magical) Very much looking forward to following them into the hole. Hoping that not *everything* was crushed to dust... Author Reply: Narsil indeed! *grins* I love the idea of fairy dust. We'll soon see what lies within the passage... | |
| Cuthalion | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/20/2007 |
| And now I'm very curious myself! Crushed pearls and opals - how exciting! Mona Author Reply: I hope the resolution of this little 'treasure hunt' is worth the wait! Must get writing... | |