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A Hawk and a Star  by Mirach 44 Review(s)
Carnifindil Telumehtar.Reviewed Chapter: 999999 on 2/7/2015
I really loved the story. Eönwë is one of my favorite characters. I wish more authors would write about him.

JasnaReviewed Chapter: 11 on 3/30/2014
So I've done it. It’s here:

I want to thank you once again! I really believe this story to be in Tolkien's spirit. And it was really great pleasure to translate it! And very special THANKS for Eönwë!!! :)))

JasnaReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/30/2013
Hurray! Thank you so much!!! That’s so kind of you!
You really made my day and… it’s just the best New Year's gift! :)))

Yes, also Olórin-Eönwë friendship is one of the matters I usually think about. ))

Thank you!

JasnaReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/30/2013
Wow. Eönwë is my favourite character ever. And I'm really fascinated.
It's so beautiful, how you show this!

Though I've not red all of it yet [I'm just extending a delight and take it "piecemeal" :))], but, especially, father-son relationship with Manwë is just beautiful! It's really how I always felt it.
And I also very much like the idea of friendship between Eärendil and Eönwë.
All of this is very touching!

May I ask: had someone translated this story into Russian already?
And if not, may I be so bold and ask your permission to try to? :))
Or maybe someone have translated it and I can find it somewhere?

Author Reply: Thank you very much for the review! Eönwë is a wonderful character, and I really like to imagine his relationships to other Silmarillion characters, not only ManwEönwë and Eärendil, but also an occassional friendly sparring match with Finrod, or him and Olórin being mischievious together sometimes before the awaking of the Elves :)

The story has not been translated into Russian, but you can do so if you want. Just link the translation back to the original either here or at FFN.

SiiwReviewed Chapter: 999999 on 10/23/2011
I can't believe I missed this! It adds a new dimension to the story that I already enjoyed a lot!

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 999999 on 2/26/2011
Wow, these are beautiful!

Author Reply: Thank you very much!

ellieReviewed Chapter: 999999 on 2/26/2011
Nice pictures! Love the ticket! LOL!

Author Reply: Thank you! Eärendil is getting commercial ;)

Mysterious JediReviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/12/2011
Wow...beautiful story. It brought tears to my eyes.

Author Reply: That's a great comliment to me, thank you very much!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 999999 on 1/11/2011
Good explanations for your choices here. I, too, see a similar spiritual relationship between Manwe and Eonwe.

Author Reply: They just make a great father and son, don't they? =) Thank you for reading the story, and for all reviews!

CairistionaReviewed Chapter: 999999 on 1/11/2011
I know I already told you when I was beta'ing this, but what a wonderful story. I loved the friendship you created between Eonwe and Earendil, and of course, the great sacrifice that Eonwe made in the name of friendship was so incredibly moving.

I'm glad you added the notes explaining what was canon and what wasn't, although you treated canon so respectfully that to me, this entire endeavor *felt* like canon. :)

A job well done! Thanks for letting me help a little with the punctuation. *g*

Author Reply: Thank you very much Cairistiona, not only for this review, but for all your help with the story! I'm glad you enjoyed the tale, and the ending! And I'm also happy that my (more or less) daring assumptions and reading behind the lines felt like canon =)

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