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Swan-song  by Lady Bluejay 36 Review(s)
Erulisse (one L)Reviewed Chapter: 25 on 6/28/2012
Bravo on a job well done. I'm finally getting a chance to do a bit of catch-up, reading those stories that I fell a bit behind with. Yours was one of them and I was delighted and looking forward to it. I was never disappointed in the Tale, the characters were penned with skill, fleshed with perfect colors, and the society was depicted in depth. Basically, everything on the stage was so perfect that the story pulled me in without extraneous thought. Thank you for keeping me entertained for so long. The road was long but so worth the walk.

- Erulisse (one L)

Author Reply: Thank you so much for staying with me. And for your kind words. LBJ

VanadesseReviewed Chapter: 25 on 6/24/2012
Magnificent !

I had some tears at the end. It was such a long and fantastic journey with you ! Thank you.

I like your charachters because the love between them seemed sound and true. Such a life force. It was inspiring.

Author Reply: So glad you enjoyed. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. LBJ

galathilReviewed Chapter: 25 on 6/24/2012
Lady Bluejay,Thank you for a beautiful story.Once again you have put your magic touch to this story.Cannot wait for your next one.LOL Galathil

Author Reply: Thank you very much for reviewing. The next one - not sure when or what that will be. LBJ

RosealynnReviewed Chapter: 23 on 5/3/2012
I have followed your series and enjoy how you make the characters seem so real life with all the normal feelings and situations a person could find themselves in both today's world and middle-earth. The story is getting very interesting. Hope your hospital treatments went well. When can we expect an update on the story.

6336Reviewed Chapter: 23 on 4/11/2012
Oh, Eomer you really have messed things up this time, Should have told Elfwine when he was old enough to understand, now you have to deal with the consequences.

Galueth did not help any either, I have always wondered about that, being a healer she would know how to prevent pregnancy, so why did she allow herself to conceive? Did she want a child so badly that any one would do or did she want Eomer's child? She is also remiss in not telling Halmir as soon as he started asking questions. I wonder what Galueth's brother thinks of the whole thing?

Hope thay can get things sorted out, to every ones satisfaction and that Elfwine, who sounds a bit of a prig, at the moment, does not blame his father too much!


annajaneReviewed Chapter: 22 on 2/29/2012
What a great chapter! It's wonderful to see the threads of the plot being woven together in a new way, though I'm afraid these unknowing brothers will have a tough time with it.

I am so enjoying this story, as I have all of the ones in this series.

Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing. I agree, both boys are in for a shock. LBJ

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 22 on 2/29/2012
Oh my....I can't wait for this. Eomer is not going like this a bit....another Uh oh is in order, slightly bigger than the last one I think.

Author Reply: Well, maybe Eomer will like it - having his other son. But its going to be a bit of a surprise. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ

galathilReviewed Chapter: 21 on 2/7/2012
Hi Lady Bluejay,Iam loving your story very much.Thank you for writing it.Can't wait for the next chapter.LOL Galathil

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 21 on 2/6/2012
Alls I can say is.....uh!oh!

6336Reviewed Chapter: 21 on 2/6/2012
Coming out of lurker mode to say I have been reading, just not reviewing this. I do like your stories and will review when I have had a chance to reread.


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