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Enter the Ranger  by Larner 173 Review(s)
FreyalynReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/26/2017
Is this actually finished now? Or is there another chapter or two, settling everything down...?

(It's still marked as 'In Progress')

PSWReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/25/2017
Big moment! :-) I'm glad the patrol was able to find out before the general public...but Orominium is going to find himself in serious trouble one day, if he keeps this kind of thing up. It's good that Aragorn was ready to go with it....

Good chapter, thanks for writing!

PSWReviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/14/2017
It is a shame... but I think Aragorn will have to (and now has) learned that if you fight, you have to fight. There's a time after battle to treat everyone, and it good to do that -- but as he's seen, it's dangerous to your own side not to do your utmost in battle. It's a horrible thing, but I'm not sure what else he can really do....

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/12/2017
How wonderful!

Now they all know who Peredhrion really is. And it came faster than I had expected.

“Oh, blessed Creator!” moaned Orominion, who fell to his knees and buried his head in his arms.  “What have I done?”

Oh dear! The embarrassement! I really pity Orominion - but only a little ;-)

elizaReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/9/2017
Larner, this has been a great story from beginning to end. Lol, I also think the rangers should get an extra "star" for not beating better manners into Orominion. **sighs*** let him stew awhile wondering if Aragorn is going to nail him.

as always I enjoy all your characters

Author Reply: I find there will be at least one more chapter, although I have a challenge story to finish first.

As for Orominion, I agree he needs to stew regarding how their new young Chieftain might just respond to this last offence. He does need to learn some manners, after all.

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/9/2017
"... a party had come from Rivendell, one that included a number of Elves and at least one woman, perhaps two"

when I read this line I was like Yes! Hope you will have names for the other elves besides the sons of Elrond. Can't wait for the reveal of who they are in the next chapter! Hope Boronaur is amongst the Rivendell company.

Thanks Larner.

FreyalynReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/8/2017
How wonderful - happy sigh.

Now, has this fright cured Orominion from 'borrowing' things in the future?

This has been a lovely story, I have enjoyed it so much.

All I want now is 'Little Star'....

KathReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/8/2017
I loved this chapter, especially Aragorn cutting off his elven braids.
Would have liked more on the reaction of both the Rivendell elves and the Dunedain at large.

Thank you.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/8/2017
What a moving and inspiring ceremony!

MattReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/8/2017
Really nice job on this. Curious if you will say who the other woman was who came from Riveidell or not. One can, of course, make assumptions. What will happen with Orovinian? Will handling the Sword That Was Broken be an issue for him? Thanks as always for your hard work on this, looking forward to future installments.

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