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On the knifes edge  by Laikwalss 50 Review(s)
SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 19 on 10/14/2017
Ah! At last! Glorfindel had been getting the rough end of the pineapple for far too long. Unselfish love for others cured him, his reward an adorable reborn Asfaloth .. A perfect conclusion to an enjoyable story Lai.

Author Reply: I could not let our dear elf hanging like that and thought of a suitable healing and reward. I thought on a beautiful foal - a son of Asfaloth but my beta reader had the wonderful idea of Asfaloth reborn. Yeah, he deserves it all. The story was much fun to write. Im glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you so much for following and reviewing. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 19 on 10/6/2017
After a brief hesitation, it walked into the elfs arms and placed his head on the warriors forearm. Glorfindel carefully enveloped the tiny animal in a gentle hug tears in his eyes. He stroked the fluffy fur and felt the foal already relaxing against him.

*melts* Oh yay, a happy ending! I have a big grin on my face now. :)

Author Reply: I could not let our dear Glorfi hanging. Im glad you liked the ending, shirebound. Thank you so much for following my story and reviewing. I really appreciate it. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 18 on 9/27/2017
So Celebrian is finally reconciled with her family. But, Glorfindel? I loved the way you portrayed little Elrohir and then Elladan, so slow to trust. A sweet chapter Lai.

Author Reply: Elrond is too tenderhearted for his own good. LOL. Yes , there is some way to go for our dear Glorfi. Im glad you liked the portray of the twins. So similar and yet so different. Thank you, my friend, for a most appreciated review. Lai

elizaReviewed Chapter: 18 on 9/26/2017
Yeah, the Calvary has arrived. glad to see Celebrian is not totally nonredeemable.

I wish you luck with Glorifindel, lol if Namo can't shake some sense in him we might have to dig up a Balrog. some thing tells me he's going to be more difficult than Celebrian.

lovely chapter

Author Reply: with a little help from "above" even Celebrian has seen reason- LOL! Your fear will be right, but I think Lord Namo has some idea of digging out a balrog. Thanks for a most appreciated review, eliza. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 18 on 9/25/2017
I'm relieved that these special people are beginning to find peace with one another again.

Author Reply: they had to - even with a bit of help. LOL! Two headstrong elves need a nudge sometimes. Thanks for your review, shirebound. Lai

elizaReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/21/2017
Darn it, real life almost made me miss a chapter....

Now talk about a plot twist. lol. Nicely done Lai, nicely done. this is interesting because that must mean Glorifindel must have a few lessons to learn. very well written, I never ever think of Glori being irresponsible and to see him viewed as such was fascinating.

can't wait to see where his dreams lead him

Author Reply: you are welcome and thank you very much. Yes, poor Glorfi, even with his age he has still some things to learn- lol! It was fun to picture him such. Thanks for a most appreciated review, eliza. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/20/2017
Oh! Nice! Great plot twist Lai. I've now joined Glorfindel and Celebrian on the cliff top. As I am afraid of heights, I hope I don't have to wait too long for rescue.

Author Reply: thanks, Tina. You have not to wait long, but the drop will be deep. Thanks for your review, my friend. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/19/2017
Whaaaaat?? Good heavens, what's happening? Such a terrible nightmare, if indeed that's what this is. Poor Glorfindel.

Author Reply: Glorfindel does not need this nightmare on top, or is it real? He will find out soon, promise. Thanks so much for reviewing, shirebound. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/14/2017
Oh! Celebrian is such a trial. She has successfully alienated just about everyone. I am not surprised she is beset by nightmares; just what is needed to bring her to her senses! I'm really looking forward to the next update Lai.

Author Reply: a nightmare is exactly what she needs now, otherwise Elrond will throw a celebration when she finally sails. LOL! Be asured the dream will help! Thank you so much for a most appreciated review, my friend. Lai

SilkleafReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/5/2017
It sort of reminded me of "It's a wonderful life" also, I wonder if somehow Galadriel isn't behind this ;D I know Celebrian's being difficult but I feel for her. Hope she wakes up soon!

Author Reply: its not Galadriel, but an other powerful being. She will wake up in the truest sense of the word. Thank you for a most appreciated review, Silkleaf. Lai

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