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On the knife’s edge  by Laikwalâssê 27 Review(s)
AmberReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/16/2017
Just found this story but am very glad to see it. I can't wait for the epic blow up between Elrond and Celebrian.

Author Reply: you are welcome. I´m glad you like my story and really appreciate your review. The blow up will come, I promise. LOL! Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 11 on 7/9/2017
Poor Celebrian, it appears she needs as much emotional healing as the rest need physical healing.

What a courtesy to the dead companion of Glorfindel. This would mean much to the warrior.

Oh my! :)

Author Reply: much healing needed all around, yes. I understand Celebrían´s anger, but also Elrond´s argument´s. There is much talk needed. Oh my, ideed. LOL! Thank you for your lovely review, shirebound. Lai

elizaReviewed Chapter: 11 on 7/8/2017
A storm indeed. Great chapter Lai, very nice seeing the family dynamics going on here. Boy talk about horrible weather, and definitely didn't see the Eagle coming, definitely a surprise.
Now I wonder if Galadrial and Celeborn are going to step back and let Elrond and Celebrian have a go at each other? lol, if I was Glorifendel I'd stay unconscious for a while

Author Reply: thank you so much, eliza. I´m gald the family emotiond came through believable. For Celeborn and Galadriel holding back I can promise nothing yet. LOL! A good advice to Glorfindel even if Elrond would not agree with you. Thanks for a much appreciated review. Lai

elizaReviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/4/2017
lol, boy the youngin's (Elrond and Celebrian) are having a rough day aren't they.
just goes to show you that no matter how old we get some times our parents still need to set us straight.

Great story Lai, really enjoying the interactions between the entire family.

Author Reply: yes, they have I dread when Elrond learns that Celebrían is at the camp and when she is meeting her husband - huh, much trouble ahead. Wise parents are always needed, regardless the age and race. I´m glad you like my family interactions. It´s great fun to write. Thank you so much for a most appreciated review, eliza. Lai

KathReviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/4/2017
Just to say how much I am enjoying this story. Lovely to read fiction about the twins when they were young. Great tension between the adult relatives! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you!

Author Reply: I´m happy you are enjoying my story. Elrond and the twins are my favourites and writing about elflings is additional fun when strong emotions are involved. The next chapter is already on the way. Enjoy! Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/3/2017
Galadriel is wonderfully wise and strong. Celebrian definitely needs tough love right now so she can help, not harm, everyone's concentration and tasks.

Author Reply: Elrond will need every support he can get and his wife would do good to follow her mother´s advice. Her rejecting attitude is not helping matters. Thanks for a most appreciated review, shirebound. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/23/2017
I can't take much more of the suspense! *frets*

Author Reply: you stand in a long row - I´m hard working on the next chapter but unfortunately there is always this real life...LOL! Thanks for your lovely review, shirebound. Lai

EllieReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/23/2017
Oh my! That wad almost too much to handle. Is there any hope for Tinar? It seems that this cliff is thirsty for the blood of elves...

Author Reply: oh my I haven´t seen it from this aspect - yes a blood-thirsty cliff. I´m already hard working to rescue our dear Tinár, or is it already too late? Keep some fingernails, dear Ellie, you will need them. Thank you so much for reviewing. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/10/2017
And here comes Celebrían as well! All of Imladris will soon be emptied in this search. It's so sad about Asfaloth. *sniff*

Author Reply: let´s see how well they can handle themselves with all the "brains" on the road. LOL! Yes poor Asfaloth. It will be an additional blow for poor Glorfindel, but I have a little surprise in stock for him. Thank you so much for reviewing, shirebound. Lai

EllieReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/9/2017
This chapter is a sad study in the powerlessness of those who care very deeply. Help needs to arrive in so many forms in order to assure a positive outcome for all.

Author Reply: you are tight, emotions running high because of this helplessness and that´s more than understandable. They will need all help they can get. Thanks for a most appreciated review, Ellie. Lai

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