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On the knife’s edge  by Laikwalāssź 45 Review(s)
elizaReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/21/2017
Darn it, real life almost made me miss a chapter....

Now talk about a plot twist. lol. Nicely done Lai, nicely done. this is interesting because that must mean Glorifindel must have a few lessons to learn. very well written, I never ever think of Glori being irresponsible and to see him viewed as such was fascinating.

can't wait to see where his dreams lead him

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/20/2017
Oh! Nice! Great plot twist Lai. I've now joined Glorfindel and Celebrian on the cliff top. As I am afraid of heights, I hope I don't have to wait too long for rescue.

Author Reply: thanks, Tina. You have not to wait long, but the drop will be deep. Thanks for your review, my friend. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/19/2017
Whaaaaat?? Good heavens, what's happening? Such a terrible nightmare, if indeed that's what this is. Poor Glorfindel.

Author Reply: Glorfindel does not need this nightmare on top, or is it real? He will find out soon, promise. Thanks so much for reviewing, shirebound. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/14/2017
Oh! Celebrian is such a trial. She has successfully alienated just about everyone. I am not surprised she is beset by nightmares; just what is needed to bring her to her senses! I'm really looking forward to the next update Lai.

Author Reply: a nightmare is exactly what she needs now, otherwise Elrond will throw a celebration when she finally sails. LOL! Be asured the dream will help! Thank you so much for a most appreciated review, my friend. Lai

SilkleafReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/5/2017
It sort of reminded me of "It's a wonderful life" also, I wonder if somehow Galadriel isn't behind this ;D I know Celebrian's being difficult but I feel for her. Hope she wakes up soon!


Author Reply: it“s not Galadriel, but an other powerful being. She will wake up in the truest sense of the word. Thank you for a most appreciated review, Silkleaf. Lai

elizaReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/5/2017
ah-ha,
let's file this under "be careful what you ask for". It also reminds me of one of my favorite holiday movies, lol it's a wonderful life.

Celebrian makes me sad in a way, she seems to be an example of a mom who is so terrified of something happening to her kids that she tries to hold on super tight, only to find out that not only does that not work but it usually ends up pushing the very people you're trying to protect away much quicker.

Here's hoping her little dream helps her see the forest for the trees before she loses every thing.

Author Reply: exactly, you have to let go when you want someone to come back. Celebrķan has to make up for her behaviour especially with her oldest. I can only say: be careful what you ask for - LOL! Thank you so much for reviewing, eliza. Lai

ElentarriReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/5/2017
Celebrian is a bitch! At this rate Elrond is going to be ecstatic and throw a celebration when she finally sails.

Author Reply: wow, my thoughts also at first, I do not overly like her, but I at least try to understand her motivations, even if I“m not very sucessful-LOL! Elrond deserves better. Love you review, Elentarri, thank you so much. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 15 on 8/30/2017
I'm finally able to catch up with your story now that my cross-country move is complete. What a difficult time for this family! And poor Glorfindel. I hope he's able to find healing.

Author Reply: Glorfindel is not to envy, but Elrond neither. Both could need a bit of mind-relaxing. Celebrķan is not helping matters. Indeed a difficult time right now. Thank you so much for still reading my story and reviewing, shirebound. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 15 on 8/27/2017
Elrond and Celebrian seem to be reconciled, but for how long? She seems to have transferred her anger to Glorfindel - more angst. Lai, how will Elrond resolve this little dilemma?

Author Reply: Elrond will not appreciate what Celebrian had done and the clashing will come very soon. What options does he have anyway? Celebrķan has to put in place. Her behavior is not acceptable. I“m sorry for poor Elrond. He would need a shoulder right now. Thanks for reviewing, my friend. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 14 on 8/27/2017
Well, that little battle sorted out some priorities, with the elvish cloak saving those in the tent. But will all hostilities have ceased by the time they reach home?

Author Reply: surely not and Celebrķan will push the limits of patience once more - promise. LOL! Thanks for another appreciated review, Tina. Lai

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