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The Fellowship  by Meldewen Ilce 23 Review(s)
LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/18/2004
Hullo, did you delete the former story? I was sure I'd left reviews before, and that there were more chapters. No matter. I am enjoying this piece all over again (if it is the one I saw before. If not, don't mind my ramblings)

I see you've been refining your work. These lines grabbed at my heartstrings:

“This peace will not last.”
So says his heart while gazing
At the calm valley

“Soon I must depart
And face peril unknown but
do so willingly.”


Author Reply:

Nope, I did not delete the former story - I have not taken The Fellowship set down since I began publishing them Sunday...

And thank you - I am trying to make each haiku better, and more conforming to the 5-7-5 rule - to say nothing of making of trying to make the words grab the readers more...


OakWolfReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/16/2004
awwww,Love the ending still too bad about Rosie :*( Any hint about which hero comes next?

Author Reply:

Well, OakWolf, I will say this: it is one of the other two hobbits left in the Fellowship...

And thanks for reading my haiku!

Stay tuned!


OakWolfReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/15/2004
Well done,I cant wait for the rest of the fellowship. might you allow your readers a preview or two?

Author Reply: Oakwolf:

Thanks for reviewing the first chapter of "The Fellowship"...

I just wanted to say thank you and to tell you I have completed chapters for the remaining members of the Fellowship.

Most likely I will be posting the chapters over the next week or so, so do be on the lookout!

Thanks again and I hope you'll read and comment on each chapter!

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