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The Great Escape  by jenolas 59 Review(s)
natReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/16/2004
aww! how cute! legolas gets a song all of his own...tee he he... i luv it!

Author Reply: Well, he is a hero after all!

sofiaReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/16/2004
really good story! i enjoyed it very much. i shall be looking forward to reading more from you.
-sofia

Author Reply: Nice of you to say so, I hope you like my other stories as well.

KarriReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/16/2004
A wonderful conclusion to a terrific story. Great work!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your reviews.

KarriReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/14/2004
Nicely delivered pay-back. :-)

Author Reply: It was fun, wasn't it?

DotReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/14/2004
Very funny! It seems those twins are *never* going to learn that they won’t get the better of their elders. Still, it’s fun to watch them trying.

I did feel a little sorry for Elladan and Elrohir, as they obviously took great delight in telling their tale and then found that no one believed them! And wow, Haldir really speaks his mind when he feels they’ve done something disrespectful!

I can just imagine the glee of Celeborn, Erestor and Glorfindel when they overheard Haldir’s disbelief. I agree with Mithrandir that it’s a joy to see them acting so light-heartedly. I wouldn’t blame him for thinking they might be a bit tipsy! I don’t know how they didn’t laugh when they arrived back and everyone stared at their hands. Trust Glorfindel to seize the opportunity to cause some embarrassment.

I had forgotten Elladan and Elrohir didn’t know that Celeborn had been affected too! He’s absolutely brilliant at putting them in their place without saying much. I have to say, though, their total respect for their grandfather really comes through at all times in this story.

At least all’s well again and even Haldir seems impressed by the bravery of his lord’s grandsons. It’s so touching to see everyone’s concern for Elrond as well. I too am glad he’s not alone, even if he is missing all the fun here.

I’m so happy for Lindir! And it sounds like Galadriel is already going to be involved with the matchmaking. That last line was hilarious – oh the horror of having to attend, or even worse to help in the preparations for, another wedding!!

It looks like the little outing is coming to an end:( They don’t have to go back yet, do they?!

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/14/2004
It must be very odd to be three thousand years old and treated as naughty little elflings. (Of course, they behave rather like naughty little elflings.)
Will they ever be allowed to grow up? It must be tempting to them to remain after all the elders leave purely so they can take responsibility for their own lives.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/13/2004
Mithrandir to the rescue of dignity! I love this story - elves in their (semi) natural habitat having fun. As it should be.

Author Reply: It is fun to see the Elves enjoying themselves as one would expect. Thanks for your comments.

DotReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/12/2004
And there they are! Yummm indeed.

I loved this chapter with your Elder Elves. I must say, that opening paragraph was just beautiful. Such a lovely image of a soft summer night. It’s quite sad to think that while they gather to celebrate such a happy occasion, it also drives home the fact that their own days in Middle-earth are coming to an end. Glorfindel and Erestor seem to have accepted that they will leave soon and I see that Glorfindel in particular almost longs for it. It speaks volumes about how much these two love Elrond and want to offer him their support. But I thought you did a great job in showing that Celeborn is quite torn, or rather knows that he will stay but regrets the fact that it will mean separation from his wife and so many friends. Legolas’ words were so right. I’m glad the younger elf could offer some comfort to Celeborn. I do love your Celeborn (yes, even with his clothes on!) because you paint him as much more of a wood-elf than a lot of people do, which of course makes sense. I loved his delight at the thought of helping Legolas bring light back to the forests of Ithilien. It just dawned on me that these three would have known and loved Aragorn nearly all his life. And Arwen too, of course. How painful it must be for these elves to contemplate the future, no matter how happy the two lovebirds are now. And yet how lucky they are to have each other as such good friends.

LOL! I nearly couldn’t bear to keep reading when Celeborn picked up the chess pieces! I’d be so annoyed if I were him! Ah well, he doesn’t seem to mind allowing Glorfindel and Erestor a little fun at his expense. He was probably just as afraid as the others were of returning to Minas Tirith and the excitable ladies with blackberry stained hands. And of course Mithrandir turns up at the right moment with Erestor’s amazing powder. Like the elves, I don’t think I’ll even question how he does that. So yet another person joins the group. Minas Tirith seems to be emptying of visitors fairly quickly. And it sounds like they took a fair amount of wine with them too if they still have some left over. Hmmn. I’d *love* to gatecrash…;)


Author Reply: Yes, Dot, there are certainly melancholy undertones for the Elves, despite the joy of a wedding between two of their most beloved. However, it is the elder three who feel the impending changes most keenly for they have seen many more changes then the younger Elves, particularly Glorfindel of course who has already experienced death.

I am pleased you like my wood elf like portrayal of Celeborn who of course is also a great warrior and leader. In this relaxed situation he is in a very mellow mood, and willing to forgive his good friends for their little prank. (But what lies in store for the young perpetrators waiting by the stream?)

And as for Mithrandir, well he is no fool and wisely prefers to spend the evening with a carefree group of Elves intent on fun and mischief rather than an evening among the wedding planners!

Elena TirielReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/12/2004
Oh, I love this! Glorfindel and Erestor are still the mischievous ones, aren't they? (Glor especially)

And what a surprise! Mithrandir (which I just typed as 'Mirthandir'... Coincidence? I think not!) is never one to miss a party!

Great story, Jenolas!

- Barbara

Author Reply: I think Glorfindel is a firm believer in enjoying even eternal life to the full, and he delights in corrupting the normally dignified advisor into the bargain!


daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/12/2004
It's interesting to speculate on why various elves sailed when they did. I always assumed that Glorfindel would go with Elrond, but I never thought about Erestor. I suppose Celeborn would stay for the twins and Arwen, and then they all would go when Arwen died. And that's about when Legolas went too. But what about Thranduil, I wonder?

Author Reply: I also wonder about Thranduil, but it is my opinion that just as Elladan and Elrohir sailed primarily to be reunited with their healed mother and Elrond, and with elven family ties being as strong as they are (except where the heart is concerned as in Arwen's case), Thranduil would not remain separate from Legolas ( or Legolas's mother if she is still in the picture somewhere) for long.

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