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| For Eyes to See That Can by Rowan | 27 Review(s) |
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| Connie | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/21/2004 |
| That was a good chapter. It really shows that you like Sam. I could see something like this happening to them. Keep up the good work. Connie. | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/21/2004 |
| What a splendid writer you are! I do love this story, and the way you tell it. "I did other things too. Like bringing him little presents such as pretty rocks I'd found, or one time a turtle shell that had lost its turtle." Every chapter is such a joy. | |
| Holdur | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/15/2004 |
| I love the theme of the hobbits seen from outside eyes! I especially liked Primula's story. So touching and so sad. | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/15/2004 |
| This is a wonderful conversation between Bilbo and Frodo. You really show their similarities (the need for honesty, and equally sharp intellects) and how much they truly love one another. | |
| Connie | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/15/2004 |
| Another great chapter. Poor Frodo. How sad it is that he thought life was good just because he had food, shelter and clothing. He no longer seemed to view love as a vital part of a good life. More, please. Connie. Author Reply: Hmmmm, that could be one interpretation. I guess I was trying more to convey that Frodo was half-heartedly trying to defend his upbringing, out of a sense of duty that had probably been drummed into him for years. Obviously he did long for more than the creature comforts in life, or he wouldn't have been so eager to go with Bilbo. Next time I'll try to communicate my characters' emotions a bit better. Thanks for the review! -Rowan | |
| Connie | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/15/2004 |
| Oh, I like this idea. Now I'm looking forward to seeing diffierent perspectives from so many different people. I now have a whole list in my mind. This chapter (ficlet) is particularly poiniant knowing what was to happen to both Frodo's parents and Frodo himself. Thanks for taking the chance on a WIP and sharing this with everyone. Connie. | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/15/2004 |
| Oh, I already love this series! You write beautifully, and with such insight. I can't wait to read more! | |