News Resources
Login
Become a member
Help
Search
|
|
| About Us News Resources
Login
Become a member
Help
Search
|
|
|
| Trust a Brandybuck and a Took! by Grey Wonderer | 13 Review(s) |
|---|---|
| Hai Took | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/29/2004 |
| I think this is one of my favorite Merry and Pippin stories that you have! I love when you go back and have them telling a story and the present mixed in! Killer chikcens! That was great! I like that Merry wasn't going to tell the rest of the story but I am glad Pippin finished it! lol, Thanks for the fun! Author Reply: Thank you. So happy that you liked this one. I wondered when I first decided to post this if I had gone a bit too far with my killer chickens. I am a big fan of flash-backs myself and so I do tend to do this sort of story form often. I am glad to see that someone else enjoys it. Thanks for the review! | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/29/2004 |
| I am a very sad person and feel the need to point out a couple of typos - on a separate review so you can delete it. I am only lowly a knight breaches I might of heard he tried to frightened the life as if a damn had burst it might not be a bad idea of chickens ate Pippin It made me laugh again looking through it. Lovely story Author Reply: I have only ever deleted one review since I started doing this and it was from a rather distrubed individual who shall remain nameless that was more interested in the names of my characters than the story. So this review stays put and I thank you for the corrections. I used them all even though the one regarding, "I might of heard" was more of a younger Pippin speech pattern thing that I was going for, but on re-thinking it, I decided that it didn't work. Thank you for taking the time and letting me know what you found in need of correcting. It helps the story a great deal. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/29/2004 |
| This story is brilliant. It is so funny it made me laugh out loud - it is set up brilliantly and has all the inevitability of a really good joke. Loved it. I think that it is my favourite so far. Author Reply: Why thank you! This is one of my favorite reviews also. Thanks for reading. | |