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| Tâd Edhel a Firion by Fiondil | 121 Review(s) |
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| lwarren | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/7/2006 |
| *hums a little Carly Simon* Whew! I was very concerned about the injuries that Aragorn might suffer from his fall. Luckily that tree was there to slow him down some! I loved the way Aragorn was encouraged to apologize to Mithfaron for not listening! Once again, the use of the herbs was so interesting, and I AM taking notes! "And will someone turn off this thrice-bedamned rain!" I LOVE IT! Glorfindel and his direct line to the One in charge of the weather! I'll just bet everyone was standing there with their mouths hanging open! And it's nice to see that Elrond was not always the in-control, informed elf he has become at present. (Gee, that was a rather convoluted statement.) Glorfindel is so good with Aragorn, the way he is encouraging him and trying to build his confidence, especially in light of all the bad luck lately! The little exchange at the very end between Elrond and Glorfindel is priceless - very funny! At least they are in the foothills and safe for the time being (of course 'safe' is a relative term in a story like this...) Great chapter, Fiondil! *trots off singing a medley of John, Carly, and Cass and Co.* linda :-) Author Reply: Those of you who have been reading Nilmandra's "History" stories might recognize the inspiration for the "lost" scene that Glorfindel describes. Elrond's reference to Elrohir's foot, of course, is from her "Glorfindel's Folly". I found as I was writing this story that I was obliquely referring to the tales written by others whom I've read and enjoyed on SOA.I had a lot of fun writing this and Alassiel said she was falling out of her chair when she got to this scene, especially hearing Glorfindel swear. | |
| lwarren | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/7/2006 |
| I'm seeing a pattern with these titles... :-) They've had me humming a little tune as I read the chapter! And what a great chapter it is! Poor Aragorn - never ever been sick, but picks up a nasty cold from being exposed to some really icky weather! Luckily, he has his own doctor along with him, and a pretty good nurse, too. I am thoroughly enjoying the use of the herbs here, along with their elvish names. That is so cool! And the Quenya lullabye Glorfindel sings is wonderful. Of course, then you had to let the poor mortal fall off a cliff! Aragorn is really having a no good, very bad day! He falls off the cliff, and you leave us hanging on one! Very good, Fiondil, very good indeed! LOL linda Author Reply: Glad you're enjoying this Linda. The hardest part of writing this was coming up with song titles, at least, after the first one. I really had to dig into my repetoire for some of them. Trying to find appropriate herbs that were easily translated into Sindarin was also hard, but fun, as well. Keep reading, Aragorn hasn't reached Mirkwood yet! | |
| lwarren | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/7/2006 |
| I really am enjoying this story, starting with the 'squabbling friends' relationship that Elrond and Glorfindel seem to share! Loved the discussion about when they should have left and whose fault it was ! LOL Also, I like your portrayal of Aragorn - I got to thinking about the fact that as one of the Dunadain, even at 25 he would be fairly young. An adult - but a very young adult. He really wouldn't be a seasoned, mature warrior until much later in his life, would he? That makes the fact that he is looking for a good, close friend very moving to me. He wants a 'brother of the heart', not a mentor or a casual companion. I am so looking forward to this trip and hope Aragorn finds his gwador...and Glorfindel finds his umbrella! LOL linda (Good for us that you finally got Internet in China...now we get to read your great stories!) :-) Author Reply: Thanks Linda, I really appreaciate your comments. I had fun writing the interaction between Elrond and Glorfindel in this scene, which was the first scene I saw but had no idea where it was going until Estel showed up. Yes, Aragorn is an adult, but I remember so was I at 25, but I wouldn't say I was really mature, and certainly I still looked to my parents and other "real" adults for guidance even though I was on my own and living my own life. I imagine it would've been much the same with Aragorn, especially with his relationship with the elves. And it's good for me that I finally got internet in China, too...now I can read Everyone eles's great stories! I was suffering from SOA withdrawal. Not a pretty picture. | |
| Calenlass Greenleaf | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/7/2006 |
| *Breathes a sigh of relief* So Estel's going to be all right. I didn't think you would injure him THAT badly :P That story about Elrond and Glorfindel was funny---especially the beam of light. *g* Author Reply: Yeah, this was a fun scene to write, although I wasn't sure how to write it at first until I happened to glance up at a poster hanging in my living room that has the caption "What do you mean, we're lost?" When I saw that, I could hear Elrond saying it and all of a sudden I was in the scene and I just started writing it. I thought the beam of light was a nice touch, myself. | |
| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/7/2006 |
| Very interesting chapter,its hard to believe old Elrond could make a mistake, I am also finding it very educational learning about all these herbs. Author Reply: Hey, even Elrond had to have his nappies changed, so it stands to reason he grew into his wisdom just like the rest of us. Glad you're enjoying this story. | |
| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/6/2006 |
| I am really liking this story,I knew there was gonna be some trouble,I can still feel Estel falling! What an evil cliffhanger! Please hurry up and post more Im sure he cant wait to get to the bottom! Author Reply: Hi Elflingimp, glad you are liking this story so far. As the story is complete (the last few chapters are being beta-read as we speak) there won't be too much of a gap between chapters. In fact, I hope to post a new chapter every day (like an old-fashioned serial), so you won't have to fall for too long. | |
| Calenlass Greenleaf | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/6/2006 |
| A cold and some broken bones? By the time they reach Mirkwood, he's going to be half dead, so it seems. Only the second chapter, and there's already a cliffhanger--can't wait for the next one. Author Reply: Or as my beta-reader put if when she read this chapter "á real cliff-faller!". Don't worry, I don't kill off my main characters too soon, no fun in that. | |
| Noor | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/6/2006 |
| A very promising start.....really enjoyable and you capture a young Aragon beautifully. I hope he survives his fall.........can't wait for the next chapter! Noor Author Reply: Thanks Noor. I was afraid I might have made Aragorn seem too young, but it's been a loooong time since I was 25 so it's hard to remember what it was like being that age — an adult, but not quite adult enough, as I recall. | |
| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/6/2006 |
| I'm so glad you are able to continue writing and posting, Fiondil! I like this look at Imladris, with Elrond and Glorfindel being very real with each other, with the bits about jealousy, and the way Estel/Aragorn fits/doesn't fit all the places he goes. He has roles, but not necessarily his own place in the world. Elrond and Glorfindel are bound to be amusing. Looking forward to more. Author Reply: I'm glad I am able to post as well. It took three weeks to get internet service here in China but finally I'm online again. Life is good. I tried to make the relationship between Elrond and Glorfindel very real; after all they've known each other for two ages, and whatever master-servant relationship they may have, they are also friends and can tease each other. The same with the other people in Imladris. And Estel/Aragorn is just young enough to feel a bit insecure about himself, I think. Stay tuned for more. | |
| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/6/2006 |
| Great start to your story, I love how Estel does not mind the rain, he is just happy to be going somewhere new. And he is still looking for someone to be his friend. Had to laugh about the 5 year old wanting his nana and ada to have a baby brother for him. Author Reply: Glad you are enjoying the story so far. Yes, I had fun writing about 5-year-old Estel wondering where his own brother is; a typical response of younger siblings. I look forward to hearing your comments of later chapters. | |