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| The Vault of Annúminas by shirebound | 26 Review(s) |
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| obsidianj | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/14/2008 |
| This is a fitting end for this adventure. The hobbits have an evening of song and tales and Elladan brings his father a memento of Elros for more songs and joy. Thanks for writing. Author Reply: Thank you very much for reviewing. I really appreciate your comments. | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/14/2008 |
| Great ending, shirebound! I especially loved Scamp and the baby sling. And I agree with some other reviewers: How could Elladan go to sleep before giving his father the harp? The only answer can be: they are Elves :) Bilbo's longing to go on an adventure again is very understandable, because that evening many things must have reminded him of that night more than 50 years ago. But now things are different. He has someone to care for, someone he loves dearly. Adventure can wait! “Adventuring is everything I hoped it would be, but also very tiring,” Frodo admitted. “I’m happy to be home again, at least for now.” ”I feel the same way, Frodo lad. Exactly the same way.” Author Reply: Adventure can definitely wait; Bilbo has his dear lad to care for, and Frodo will need him for quite a few more years. I just had to show Scamp being possessive about that sling. It was kind of Mrs. Gamgee to relinquish it! Thank you so much. This was a great deal of fun to write. | |
| aprilkat | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/14/2008 |
| Oh, I was happy to see another chapter up, but so sad to see it was the end. What an amazing adventure on so many levels! I like the contrast into what emphasis is placed on the trip in their summing up at home by the Elves and Hobbits - perfect for their cultures. I think I would get impatient if I were around Elves much - I couldn't believe that Elrond waited until the next day to get the big surprise! I guess if you are immortal it would be like waiting a couple of seconds... Your characterization of all these folks is so perfect. I feel like I'm leaving a visit with much-loved friends. Lovely work. Author Reply: Oh yay, I'm glad the contrast of cultures came through, as I wasn't sure it would. It's difficult to imagine life as an elf would view it! Thank you so much. | |
| SurgicalSteel | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/14/2008 |
| *wistful sigh* This was just lovely, and I was both happy and sad to see it. Happy for an update - sad because this particular tale has come to an end. The gentle humor over the bootlaces was just adorable, as was the baby sling. Elrond's reaction to his brother's harp was just lovely, and the canon poem at the end? Just perfect. Author Reply: Thank you! I loved sharing the very beginnings of this story with you in person, and I'm amazed (as usual) at the path it took, not all of which was planned. I love it when that happens. :) | |
| lbilover | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/14/2008 |
| Oh, I'm very sorry to reach the end of this wonderful tale. But I hope there will be more stories in this universe, because I definitely want to read more about Frodo, Sam, Bilbo, Aragron, Scamp and her pups. What I especially love about this story is the mix of emotions it invokes: gentle humor at Scamp making Aragorn's bootlaces 'fashionable', even while Elladan's harp playing and singing is sweeping everyone away. The scene between Elladan and Elrond was deeply moving; it's hard to imagine much that could bring a tear to Elrond's eye, but being given Elros's harp definitely would. As always, you weave in future canon so beautifully, such as Bilbo's comment about how long he will be content to stay in the Shire. But I can't end without quoting this line: 'As I’ve told you before, Frodo Baggins, you are unforgettable.' How true that is!! Thank you so much!! *hugs* Author Reply: I really appreciate you letting me know that the emotions come through. This was a gentle story, but I hope a satisfying one. Thank you very much for your lovely comments. | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 1/14/2008 |
| This is so sweet! I could just imagine the cozy evening in Bag End, and then later, Elrond's reaction to seeing his brother's harp. And as usual, you end on such a note of hopefulness and love. What a lovely "Quarantine-verse" story this has been! Author Reply: Thank you so much, Dreamflower. If there's one thing these "Q" stories have in common, I certainly hope it's 'love'. :) | |