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The Wars of the Valar  by Fiondil 11 Review(s)
RadbooksReviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/2/2007
*sob* I haven't been able to review the last few chapters, though they were written very well. It was just too hard. But, I've got tears running down my face as I finish this one. I knew Namo would be freed, but what he had to go through was so heart-wrenching. I don't blame him for wanting to get away from everyone and everything especially when it seemed like his Atar had abandoned him too. Yet, in the end, there is no other that can really bring the healing he needs. I do hope Manwe and the others find out where he is soon because they must be so worried for him.

Wonderfully done.

Author Reply: I know these last few chapters have been difficult for mamy people (me not the least as I had to write them!). I do appreciate you taking the time to review this chapter, which I think (and hope) is as dark as it gets for quite some time. The next chapter I think will be healing for everyone involved. It certainly was for me in writing it.

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