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| The Wars of the Valar by Fiondil | 11 Review(s) |
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| Ces | Reviewed Chapter: 26 on 4/25/2008 |
| Námo was awesome! So in control even though he could feel Melkor trying to get the better of him. No wonder he becomes who he is after having to endure everything he did. The emergence of the universe was wonderful. You really do bring words to life in your descriptions. The mark of an excellent writer. And Melkor leaves to plot some more I guess. At least with him around it's never boring! Ces Author Reply: Thanks, Ces. Although we're not talking about the emergence of the universe, merely the emergence of our own solar system. Námo was indeed awesome and I think we're beginning to see the Vala he eventually becomes in the later stories. Melkor, of course, is not finished yet. He still has several tricks up his proverbial sleeve, as we will see in subsequent chapters. Thanks for reviewing. | |