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| The Wars of the Valar by Fiondil | 12 Review(s) |
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| Reviewed Chapter: 45 on 11/19/2008 | |
| this started out interesting but has turned into just a rephrase of silmarillion. earlier chapters kind of cool, latest ones not so much. Author Reply: Well, this tale takes place within the framework of the Silmarillion, though admittedly, the earlier parts are extrapolated from what little detail Tolkien offers us about the construction of Eä and Arda. Now, however, we are coming near to the time in which the Elves awake and so there is more rephrasing of events mentioned in the Silmarillion though I have attempted to add my own details and twists of plots. Sorry this displeases you but I always planned this story to be this way. There will still be some chapters that are more original to me (Námo and Vairë's wedding, for instance); you just have to be patient. | |
| 6336 | Reviewed Chapter: 45 on 11/19/2008 |
| Yes, she said yes!!! Yay!!! When is the wedding and where are they registered? Hm, I think Varda had fun rearranging things and sticking her tongue out at Melkor via the Valacirca! One small thing in the second section, forth paragraph you need a space between of and Ibrinithilpathanizel. More please, Lynda Author Reply: The wedding won't be immediate but we'll see it in a few chapters down the road. Thanks for pointing out the typo; it's been corrected. | |