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| Elf, Interrupted: Book Two: Glorfindel's Quest by Fiondil | 12 Review(s) |
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| Kitty | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/6/2008 |
| Love the image of the Maiar hovering over their charges like mother hens *grin* And Manveru and Erunáro having to fight Eönwë and Fionwë ... *snicker* Huh – fëar entwined? How did they do *that*?? It truly seems as if there are no bounds to the trouble these particular Reborn can get into! I was not sure what was wrong with Beleg, but I *never* would have guessed that! This just gets better and better Irmo is so right, and in more than one way – positive, for the readers, and negative, for our dear elves. Can’t wait for the update (as usual) – want *so* to know how that turns out! And I hope the Valar are able to sort these two out – literally! – without too much trouble and damage to their fëar. It would be such a nasty shock for their friends and the Kings, particularly Arafinwë and Olwë, when something went wrong! P.S. Is the Maia’s name Aldarondur or Aldarondil? You’re using both versions here. Author Reply: Thanks for the heads-uo on the name. It should have been Aldarondur all along. I've gone in and made the corrections. We will see how these two elves entwined themselves and how they are extricated in the next chapter. | |
| Nieriel Raina | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/6/2008 |
| *lightbulb comes on* Aha...hmm...interesting. So perhaps, the ability to move elves in their bodies between dimensions shall become necessary around the time Numenor sinks. And this was how they were able to 'transport' elves in Last Messenger mebbe. Interesting.... There is so much priceless humor in this chapter, I would fill up the review with quotes! But I must hit a couple of them. "So instead he sent you two," Oromë stated. Manveru gave the Vala a nod. "We practically had to fight Eönwë and Fionwë for the honor, ...... Oromë nodded his understanding, then gave the younger Vala a wicked grin. "And I understand you lost a bet with your sister. How’s that working out for you?" Námo merely smirked. "So far I’ve managed to get Vorondil and Aldundil into so much trouble with my little... er... suggestions, they’ll be working out their punishments until the day after the Ending of Arda." ...... *snort* GACK! Entwined elven fëar doesn't sound good. I hope they can untangle them! Wonderful chapter, Fiondil! I loved every minute! Author Reply: Hi NiRi. I'm glad you found a lot of humor in this chapter. Entwined fëar does not sound good at all. We'll see how it all works out in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. | |