Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. The story format itself echoes the parallels between the two couples' lives, and the way you have Aragorn and Beren come together joins the lines perfectly. I like how Aragorn shows wisdom and restraint in not revealing too much to Beren, and Beren's simple reply of "Hope" when Luthien asked what he'd seen was a masterful touch. This is definitely a story for my "favorites" file. Thank you for writing it!
Author Reply: Hello Cairistiona. I am so glad you enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for letting me know. I really appreciate it. It's one of my favorites, too. I enjoyed writing it. I thought it a good idea for these two Men to meet across the ages. |
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