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In the Mind's Eye  by shirebound 19 Review(s)
harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/3/2012
Loved the light hearted start but. Oh, oh, oh. More soon, very soon please! Pretty please!

Author Reply: I'll do my best! Thank you so much for reading.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/3/2012
Oh my, what a cliffhanger!!!

How will Gandalf proceed, I wonder. And what is in Gandalf's opinion the worst that could happen?

I could add more questions, but I know that I just have to wait ;-)

P.S.: I found it very funny that Pippin stood on Merry's shoulders just to be once taller than Aragorn :-)

Author Reply: Hobbits are quite ingenious when it comes to entertaining themselves and their friends. And I suspect it does get quite annoying to have to look up so high all the time to speak to others!

Thank you for reading, my friend. Time to get busy answering all those questions...

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/3/2012
You are evil.

At some point, just after the half of the chapter, I thought you'd do this. And of course, you did. Don't you have feelings for your poor readers?

Author Reply: I *love* my readers! Sorry about the cliffie, but some stories just insist on being written this way. :)

6336Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/3/2012
Well the first part of their plan has worked, they have Aragorn completely out of it, now to get the Ringwraith out of him!

Huggs,
Lynda

Author Reply: Onwards to Part II of the Great Wizardly Plan!

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/3/2012
Aaaaccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

I hate cliffhangers.

Great chapter. Suspense was intense. Had me chewing my nails.

"Elrond closed his eyes for a moment, savoring the sound." This made me weep.

Needless to say, along with your other fans, I wait patiently (NOT!!!).


Author Reply: Thank you, that's a wonderful compliment. Sorry about your nails! :)

CairistionaReviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/3/2012
Lord have mercy, shirebound, you're killing me with this!! What a suspenseful chapter and a terrific cliffhanger to end it. My heart was pounding by the end. I don't suppose there's any chance of the next one being posted in, oh, I don't know... the next five minutes?

*sigh*

Didn't think so. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next installment!

Author Reply: I wish I could write that quickly these days! I'll try to hurry Gandalf along and I'll take COPIOUS notes about what happens.

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/3/2012
Well, that part of the plan worked. Not sure if the rest of Gandalf's plans will work quite as easily, though I hope Aragorn doesn't suffer any further ill from what is happening. Glad to see this story still continuing, Shirebound.

Author Reply: Thank you, Fiondil. There's more to Gandalf than meets the eye (or the Eye), thankfully. :)

Addie71Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/3/2012
Frodo’s eyes filled with tears. “As a prisoner?” You know, you about broke my heart with this question and all that it implies. And if Gandalf's plan works, I can't help but wonder how it will effect Aragorn when he is told what happened to him. Or will they? *ponders*







Author Reply: I'm pondering, too! We'll both have to wait and see what happens. Thanks so much, Addie.

Erulisse (one L)Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/3/2012
Oh my, I just hope this works out well. It's been a great story so far.

- Erulisse (one L)

Author Reply: Thank you! It's been fun (and challenging) leading up to this part.

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