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Revolution  by Laikwalâssê 76 Review(s)
FiondilReviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/22/2011
Poor Legolas is just too young to understand why he can't go home, isn't he? And now they have to leave again. Hopefully they will be able to get away in time and I hope little Legolas doesn't pull a temper tantrum at the wrong moment. *grin* Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.

Author Reply: and the house of Oropher is known for throwing temper tantrums...*g*. It´s hard for a elfling so young to understand in a world where Ada can still make everything alright. Thank you for your much appreciated review, Fiondil. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 7 on 11/12/2011
No, indeed, they are not in any position to counter a revolution, but I'm sure between Glorfindel and Elrond, not to mention the Twins, they'll think of someting to save Thranduil from Thoran and his cronies. And what's happened to Galadhion and Legolas, I wonder? Looking forward to the next chapter, Lai.

Author Reply: Imladris is a good start to ask for help, but I fear this will not be enough. What happened to the other brothers will occur soon in the next chapters. Hope to see you there. Thank you so much for your much appreciated review. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/6/2011
Well, at least Saeron made it to Imladris, though whether he will live to tell the tale still remains to be seen, I think. Hopefully he will recover enough to tell Elrond what has happened, or maybe Glorfindel will just hie off with the Twins and see for himself. *grin* Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author Reply: yes, Saeron did made it and with Elrond at hand he will be able to tell the tale but what then? Good advice will be dire. Thank you for a much appreciated review, Fiondil! Lai

BeeGeeReviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/6/2011
As a Thranduil fan, I'm really enjoying this story! Your pacing is very good, and that really keeps the suspense flowing. The characterization is excellent also, both Mirkwood and Imladris elves. I'm looking forward to more, please!

Author Reply: BeeGee, you are not knowing how glad I´m for you saying this. Although I´m a Elrond fan I like Thranduil vey much also but was ever reluctant to write about such a powerful character. The suspense is working, then I have done something right. More is coming soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/28/2011
Ah, the plot thickens. I'm glad Saeron was able to escape. Good of his horse to help defend him against his attackers. But he's sorely wounded. I hope he makes it to Rivendell alive. A gripping chapter, Lai.

Author Reply: to have a war-horse at hand does indeed not hurt but to reach Rivendell will only be the easy part. Thank you, Fiondil for reading and reviewing. Lai

galathilReviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/27/2011
Dear Laikwalasse I am enjoying the story.I hope it is help that Saeron has found.Galthil

Author Reply: dear galathil, I´m so glad that you are enjoying my story. What Saeron has found we will see soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/19/2011
Thoran is beyond dangerous. It's obvious he's slipping into madness (if he hasn't done so already). Poor Thranduil. I sincerely hope someone rescues him. Even if they have to smuggle him out of the Stronghold and he has to fight to get it back, at least he'll be fighting instead of at the mercy of a lunatic. Looking forward to more, Lai.

Author Reply: you are right: he´s mad and that makes the fight against him so dangerous. Nothing is predictable. Rescue is not in sight, at least for the time being. More will be coming soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Fiondil. Lai

CaunedhielReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/19/2011
ahhh I really want to hit Thoran right now! Did legolas get out all right and what happened to the other brothers? Please I beg you, the suspense is killing me! Update soon!!

Author Reply: you are not the only one who wants to hit Thoran. I´ve many offers right now, including me! We will soon see what happened to the King´s sons. Glad the suspense is working - *evil grin*. Thank you so much for your review. It´s much appreciated. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/8/2011
And both the plot and the suspense deepens. Looking forward to more, Lai. I sincerely hope Thoran will be getting a little chat from Lord Námo in the end. If anyone deserves a little 'sit-down' with the Lord of Mandos, it's he. LOL!

Author Reply: Hi Fiondil, I´m still wondering what will happen to Thoran in the end but a sit-in with Lord Namo is a pretty well idea. We will see,but until then it´s a long way to go especially for Thranduil. Thank you so much for your thoughts. Lai

CaunedhielReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/8/2011
this is really good, I've always enjoyed reading fics centred around the wood elves and especially Thranduil. Please continue with this, I'm eagerly awaiting more!!

Author Reply: I´m glad you like my story centered on wood-elves. Sadly these stories are rare. Thranduil has always intrigued me. More is coming soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it. Lai

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