Failed to review the last chapter, but it and this one are good. The plot is certainly coming along. I do feel sorry for Dave. Our Elves are keeping him safe, but anyone would resent the treatment. Thanks again.
Author Reply: Hi UTfrog. You're right that Dave is feeling resentful at the way the Elves are treating him, though they are doing it to keep him and his family safe. I'm glad you enjoyed the last chapter (and there's nothing that says you can't review it even now *grin*) as well as this one. Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate it. |
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