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Imrahil's Daughters  by Lialathuveril 103 Review(s)
obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 10 on 1/6/2013
I knew it. Something was bound to happen. It was too peaceful. Now they are truly caught. Are the riders aware who Gliwen really is? I got the feeling they are watching the show.

Author Reply: The riders think that Gliwen is Lothiriel in disguise, which is correct of course. It's funny really that they are quite right, unlike their better informed king.

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/6/2013
What a peaceful afternoon. I'm waiting for the catastrophe that is bound to happen sooner or later *g*

Author Reply: You know me far too well! ;-D

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 8 on 1/6/2013
Oh, Lothiriel, who are you kidding? You are lost. Loved Eomer's entrance. Hopefully, Elphir and especially Dorgan will leave Lothiriel alone from now on.

Author Reply: That's the scene I mentioned enjoying writing. Eomer's got the right edge to deal with characters like these.

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/6/2013
Who is doing the digging now? Eomer is not better than Lothiriel. These two are already caught in their own web. Now to watch the show until they realize they belong together and how to untangle this net of their own making.

Author Reply: Wow, you've been busy reviewing, many thanks! And I'm pleased to hear you're still enjoying watching the show.

Lia

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/1/2013
The web gets more and more tangled. Lothiriel never stands a chance. She is falling for Eomer and he for her. They both seem to have an "official" and an "unofficial" persona. I liked the belt with the bees.

Author Reply: It's a shame they're not both twins, then they could match up their two cold and fiery personas. A double wedding ;-)

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/1/2013
That was quite a picture. Aunt Ivriniel in a pink! donkey cart drivig ahead of the Rohirrim. That is too funny. That was an unexpected turn. Ivriniel drinking Arak. Who would have thought.

Author Reply: Hi Obsidianj,
yes, Ivriniel has hidden depths ;-D And an impeccable taste for colour of course...

Lia

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/1/2013
Oh, no. Now Eomer helps in creating 2 Lothiriels, although he doesn't know it yet. The plot gets more and more involved. I think in the end nobody can disentangle it anymore. All are involved in either creating more twists or abetting preposterous ideas. Imrahil and, it seems especially, Elphir will throw a fit when they find out. I think Elphir needs a lesson. Letting a friend speak about Lothiriel (and women in general) like that without telling him to take a hike.

Author Reply: I actually had some problems myself keeping the plot straight in my mind at all times, it got so convoluted. As for Elphir, he's in for a set-down by Eomer, but you might have reached that bit by now. One of those scenes that are a pleasure to write.

Lia

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/1/2013
This chapter made me laugh. The plan gets more and more preposterous. Lothiriel digs herself deeper and deeper into a hole. It doesn't help that she finds willing helpers. The hole just gets deeper. And garlic to drive Eomer away? A good thought if he never eats garlic. But I have the suspicion that garlic is commonly used in Dol Amroth, and then it doesn't work...

Author Reply: She doesn't just dig, she digs with a plan in mind, that's even more dangerous ;-D

And what you said about the garlic suddenly made me wonder if it would work against nazgūls (the equivalent of vampires in Middle Earth?). There's a plot bunny...

Lia

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/1/2013
Oh, boy. Lothiriel is getting deeper and deeper into trouble. Eomer will find out... and then she will be truly caught. Now on to read the next chapters of this charade.

Author Reply: Yes, this Lothiriel is a great digger of holes for herself ;-)

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/1/2013
Finally, I have time to start reading this story. Eomer and forgetting that kiss? Yeah, right, dream on. Lothiriel is setting herself up for a deep fall. And this time she has co-conspirators. I don't think Lothiriel's plan will work, but that is the whole point of this story;-). I love to see how you make her wind and struggle, to get out of this fix.

Author Reply: Hello obsidianj,
and nice hearing from you again! You are of course right that Lothiriel has made a bit of a misjudgement there concerning the memorability of her kiss - but then she lacks practise (at the moment...).

Lia

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