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The Journey Home  by Fiondil 15 Review(s)
TariReviewed Chapter: 10 on 3/8/2013
They could use a supply of Lembas about now.

You do know how to keep us coming back for more. I'll have to wait until next week to find out who or what approaches. Patience is not my strong suit.

Author Reply: They certainly could, Tari. And Monday isn't that far away. I'm sure you'll do fine. *grin* I'm glad you are enjoying this story and I appreciate you taking the time to let me know.

FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 10 on 3/8/2013
Gosh, you are going to kill me! not even a hint of what it is out there! Great chapter, as always, and back to the cold, I'm only reading and I'm cold, Brrrr...
Poor Maglor, so much suffering.

Author Reply: Glad you liked the chapter, Fantasia. And while there is much suffering, there is also joy and Maglor and the others are probably feeling more alive now than they have in a very long time. We'll see what's out there in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 10 on 3/8/2013
all of them spent hours walking through the valley communing with the trees, singing songs of growth and well-being to them

What a sweet and un-looked for blessing for those trees. I just love imagining that scene.

Author Reply: I'm glad you found that scene to your liking, shirebound. It is quite beautiful, and, as you say, a sweet and unlooked-for blessing for the trees. Thanks for leaving a comment. I really appreciate it.

CelethReviewed Chapter: 10 on 3/8/2013
Oh noooooo!!! Monday will take forever to come around...and meanwhile, what could that creature be? Surely not one of the half-orcs?! They smelled them early on the first time...could it be - could it be a hobbit? After all they're in the Shire, and one or two might have survived, deep deep down in their nice snug holes...all thru the ice age? Not likely...ahhh, this is going to drive me crazy!

I can't wait for Monday and the next chapter...

Author Reply: Hi Celeth. I doubt Hobbits would make terrifying noises and I'm pretty sure none are around. Hang in there. Monday will come soon enough, I promise. *grin* Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it.

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 10 on 3/8/2013
AAAAGGGGHHHHHH! You and your cliffhangers. I was enjoying a peaceful, hopeful chapter and here you go making a scary (or not) ending. I want the noise to be the Valar bringing tea but somehow I doubt it.

Anyway, loved the scenery descriptions and the background information on the elves.


Author Reply: Sorry UTfrog. No Valar bringing tea. We'll find out in the next chapter what it's all about. I'm glad you enjoyed the descriptions of the scenery and the background information on some of the elves. Thanks for commenting. It's appreciated.

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