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| Thunder & Lightning by Lady Bluejay | 69 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 8/13/2013 |
| At last she is beginning to think more clearly, and her mother's advice is as good as she'd hoped for. Good to see that she is willing to listen this time, and that she knows her heart better. Author Reply: Hopefully they will sort it all out in the last chapter - I would hate to leave them unhappy. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ | |
| UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 8/13/2013 |
| I suspect Lothierial's parents laughed all the way to Edoras. Their sort of plan worked well. Still really enjoying this. Author Reply: Yes, it certainly is working out for her father. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ | |
| MistyC | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 8/12/2013 |
| I've been following this story, as well as most of your Eomer/Lothiriel stories for quite some time. I love your writing style and characters, but tend to be a lurker and not comment much. I'm looking forward to seeing if Eomer can finally find the right words to convince Lothiriel that he really does love her. I only have one minor complaint. When Alwunn said the line 'Well, whatever,' it kind of pulled me out of the story. I don't think anyone in Middle Earth would say that... at least not and mean it in the context we would today. Other than that, loving the story and looking forward to the resolution of this fiery couple. Author Reply: I think you are right and will change that phrase when I do the other corrections. Thanks a lot for taking the time to review. I will update as soon as I can. LBJ | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 8/8/2013 |
| Thank Goodness Lothiriel is safe!I loved the rescue scene with Eomer and her ruse to escape.I hope she and Eomer will overcome their misunderstanding. Author Reply: Hopefully Eomer will use all his charm to repair the situation.LBJ Author Reply: Hopefully Eomer will use all his charm to repair the situation.LBJ | |
| galathil | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 8/1/2013 |
| Hi Lady Bluejay I am loving your latest story. I really hope that Eomer can take his foot of his mouth, long enough to ask her to marry him.That is if Lothíriel doesn't kill him in the mean time. Can't wait for the next chapter.LOL Galathil ps hope you are well. Author Reply: I had better keep Lothy away from any poisonous foodstuffs until she has calmed down! LBJ | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 7/27/2013 |
| Oh, a typical bodice-ripper image here of the bare-chested hero! And he managed to put his foot in it, plus she's gone all defensive prematurely--again! I've been giggling at her imagination! Author Reply: I just had to give a glimpse of his chest! And putting his foot in it seems to be in character. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ | |
| curiouswombat | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 7/26/2013 |
| Oh dear - I could sort of see this coming... she really isn't in the right mood for him to joke, or approach it like this, is she? Silly Éomer! Author Reply: No, he chose the wrong words and the wrong time there. Thanks a lot for your continued support. LBJ | |
| UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 7/26/2013 |
| The very young romantic in me says she should have fallen in his arms and said yes, I will marry you. The practical me shouts yes, she needs a solid declaration of love from him, first. Please keep this delightful story going. Thank you. Author Reply: I think she quite sensible for one so young! Thanks for taking the time to review.LBJ | |
| elliska | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/26/2013 |
| I thought I'd remembered to review this chapter, but I see I forgot...Brilliant of her to think of poisoning them. She is such a strong character. Author Reply: I always thought Imrahil's daughter would be able to hold her own somewhat. Thanks a lot for taking the time to review. | |
| elliska | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 7/26/2013 |
| I am so glad she is safe, but most of all: poor Eomer! So close but yet so far. Hopefully they can enjoy making up. Author Reply: Depends how long she takes to forgive him! Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ | |