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Elf Academy 3: The Enemy Within  by Fiondil 22 Review(s)
LaerReviewed Chapter: 34 on 4/25/2014
glad that someone is starting to get them to calm themselves. Too bad Finrod had to be all "Prince of the Realm" on them to make them see it tho. Daren is right. They need to see how much titles don't mean much around here any more. The more they try and make it that way the more issues it will cause in the long run between the elves and all of us mortals. We may not be all that and a bag of chips..but neither or they. so nyeh. ;)

I am also glad that Roy and Dan are being stood up for by several of the elves and not just the Wiseman elves. Hopefully all will be well soon and they can get back to doing what they are supposed to be doing.

I felt bad for Nell and the three amigos. That has to be hard on them. Not knowing what egg shell they were going to crack next as they tried to tip toe around everything. :( Glad that is being worked out also.

Author Reply: Hi Laer. Sometimes being in "Prince of the Realm" mode is the only thing that works, but hopefully they've gotten the message. We'll have to see.

We'll be seeing the Twins soon enough. In time, they will return to Wiseman and perhaps when they do certain people will be more respectful of them.

And the youngsters are torn, not knowing which "side" to be on since they have loved ones on both sides. Now that the air has been cleared, they may feel less at sea emotionally. College will help. They'll be too busy with their courses and making new friends with their Mortal classmates to worry about their elders.

Thanks for reviewing. It's much appreciated.

CelethReviewed Chapter: 34 on 4/25/2014
I just love the way you protrayed Glorfindel in this chapter, even though he isn't here.

And I'm beginning to like the Three Amigos. I hope they were successful in making the right pointy ears for their snowelves. That made me smile.

Author Reply: Hi Celeth. I'm glad you liked the way Glorfindel was portrayed here. I thought it time to give him some more backstory.

I'm sure the youngsters were able to figure out how to make snowelves with the proper pointy ears. *grin*

Thanks for reviewing. It's appreciated.

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