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| Elf Academy 3: The Enemy Within by Fiondil | 15 Review(s) |
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| Laer | Reviewed Chapter: 70 on 8/29/2014 |
| ahhh such a beautiful fluffy ending :) Special Agent Colson kind of poked one bear too many didn't she. She didn't have a chance with the twins and when "Loren" did his magic she was toast! LOL! Author Reply: I'm glad you liked the ending, Laer. And yes, Agent Colson just didn't know who she was dealing with and never will. Thanks for taking the time to review. I appreciate it. | |
| 6336 | Reviewed Chapter: 70 on 8/29/2014 |
| Ah, yes, Glorfindel in 'I will be obeyed mode' is not easily denied. Besides he has routed more important people than Agent Colson in his time! Well it looks like Felicity will be doing O.K. with Ron and the Elves help, she does need to go out in the woods and scream though, letting it all out will be a big help! Dave Michaelson is not a country bumpkin, far from it. Why do big city law enforcement always seem to think small town or out the way places law enforcement are? In some ways they are better equipped to handle there local issues better than some big cities, they know just about everybody on a first name basis which is a big help. Hm, I am not sure about Ratty, if he does recover will he remember what happened? As for the other three they were in, a way, led astray by Ratty, though they did seem to enjoy beating up on Derek and Zach. So Voronder and Ercasse are going to get frisky are they, they had better make the most of it while they have the house to themselves! Looks like things will be calming down for a few chapters, we can only hope! Time to give the Cliff House a through cleaning, check supplies etc., any volunteers? Have a good weekend, Huggs, Lynda Author Reply: Hi Lynda. Felicity is a survivor. She'll be okay eventually. Dave is definitely not a country bumpkin. Whether Farrell recovers or not remains to be seen. Things should calm down a bit for a while but no promises. Have a good weekend yourself. Hugs back. | |
| Sunny | Reviewed Chapter: 70 on 8/29/2014 |
| Hah! Alex' fate is clearly sealed - he just doesn't know it yet. And I found the comprison with Gladriel quite amusing - but then I suppose a strong-minded person is required to keep Mr Super-Secret Agent in line. And if Valar and Maiar start dropping in on her, as they do with Alex and the Elves, I suspect she won't take any nonsense from them either. ;-) I do wonder about her past, though, when she says that getting kidnapped (even if her kidnappers were both gentle and polite) was far from the worst that had happened to her. I see that Michaelson is taking no nonsense from the Elves. Good for him! Tee-hee. I guess that Terri Colson is going to find out the hard way tht vamping Elves just isn't going to work. Somehow I suspect she is going to be a slow learner, even allowing for the way Mortals' brains tend to melt and dribble out of their skulls when confronted woth Elven gorgeousness! Author Reply: Hi Sunny. Yeah, Alex is doomed. LOL! We may learn something about Felicity's past, though not in this story. You'll have to wait until the next installment. And Terri Colson never had a chance with either the Twins or Glorfindel. Thanks for leaving a comment. I appreciate it very much. | |
| Kevana | Reviewed Chapter: 70 on 8/29/2014 |
| I'm starting to wonder if cutting off the head (Farrell) is simply going to create a hydra. It seems there are many people involved with this if someone dropped him off. It's almost a little strange that they just let Felicity go and treated her so nicely. They sure weren't that kind to Zack and Derek. I'm glad to see she's okay, though! I think she's a lot tougher than Glorfindel and Vorondur are giving her credit for. Chicka's got some history to her, huh? Maybe if she someday feels like sharing that with Alex, it could help both of them. Bwahaha, nice zinger, Dave. I bet he learned that phrase pretty quickly. I was wondering if/when another intelligence agency was going to start getting involved. Glorfindel, you sneaky supermodel with your golden hair! I hope Helyanwë gets dolled up sometime and puts his jaw on the floor so he gets a chance to know what that feels like, LOL! I'm sure the exiles will be glad to get back home, but somehow I think Derek's going to be in a state. Did anybody call him and give him a heads-up about Alex? Oh, dear. Great chapter, do hope somebody's thought to clap those handcuffs on Farrell...unconscious or not, it doesn't bear taking risks with that dude. Yikes. Have a spectacular weekend with much fun and hopefully an extra day off! If anybody needs me I'll be over here pouting about the end of summer coming waaaay too quickly. ;) -Kevana Author Reply: Hi Kevana. Ron told Holly that Derek was called. I guess you skimmed over that part of their conversation. *grin* The people who took Felicity were not the same who hurt Zach and Derek. They are still behind bars. These people helped Farrell to escape. Felicity was merely the lure. Had Alex stopped to check on her he would've found that she was indeed missing. I wouldn't be surprised if one of them was keeping an eye on him even as Finlay was and as soon as Alex headed for Mt. Horace, they released Felicity since her "role" was done. Dave is nobody's fool. I'm sure the Elves' estimation of him went up a notch or three. We had summer? Where? *looks around a bit bemused* Have a great weekend yourself. Thanks for leaving a review. I greatly appreciate it. | |
| UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 70 on 8/29/2014 |
| Hooray for Felicity. Her background may be more interesting than we thought. Or she is in denial and needs help. The FBI agent interaction with the elves was so funny. Well done! I am sure you have plenty planned for us, but at least I can climb down off the cliff for the weekend. As always a huge thank you. Author Reply: Felicity has depths to her that we are only just beginning to glimpse. The scene with the FBI agent is my favorite in this chapter. I'm glad you found it amusing. I do indeed have plenty planned for you, so sit back and enjoy. *grin* Thanks for reviewing, UTfrog. I very much appreciate it. | |